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There are constant fights and conflicts
between brothers and sisters
between little children
between colleagues
between governments
between rich and poor

but most of all
between men and women

Why does it have to be that way?

Maybe because

men talk and women have to listen
men rule and women have to obey
men think with their brains and women with their hearts
men live in reality and women in a phantasy world
men want to be free and women need to be protected
men need success and authority and women only need happiness
men need their comfort and women understanding
men need physical satisfaction and women the feeling of being loved

It is difficult, almost impossible

but there is a saying:
contraries attract each other!

Let't give it a try
and love a chance

it might be hard work
but it's worth it

in this cold, lonely world
to have someone by your side.

Don't give up
on your love.....




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Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
Wow! You said a lot here. Your amazing.......
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
"don't give up on your love." go as far as you can then leave the man or woman. There's a lesson to be learned after loss. You learn to hang in there almost at any reasonable cost. Just as you stated here. llve u G
Reviewed by Birdie Houston
YOu got that right ......very wise message
Reviewed by The Gentle Man
You raise some good points in this poem. Thanks for sharing!
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

It is that human instinct that makes us. One minute the yelling and screaing occours, the next minute you wonder "How'd we get on the floor rolling around-NOT fighting"! Loved this.

Reviewed by Sandie Angel
It's such a sad world sometimes...when you think of it. Good thought-provoking piece.

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
Reviewed by Christine Morell
An excellent one Nico. I enjoyed it.
Reviewed by Dale Clark
I like your message and agree! Great write.
Thanks also for exposing the female mind as Dana pointed out. lol ;)
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Beautiful poem Serenity, and I would never give up on love or my love either. Bill Murray
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Beautiful messages here...loved this write of urs.....BHUWAN
Reviewed by richard poor
very good!!!
Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Great message Serenety! Very Nice!

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Very excellent message and write. (Spelling?fantasy, not phantasy, unless it's a play on "phantom.")
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Well done Nico, Give love a chance! I'm for that;-)
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
What a lovely message here, just excellently powerful and wise,

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

The Best Fight I Ever Won Was The One I Walked Away From!!!

Reviewed by E. Richardson
I liked this. It is an interesting twist on the ageless battle of the sexes. Good work here.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
You are indeed wise, Nico! Powerful write! :) (((HUGS)))
Reviewed by Trixie Love
Powerful message...

Great one...

Trixie :)
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
So beautiful and thought provoking.
Reviewed by William Bonilla
A kool write Serenety
enjoyed reading

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Thank you I won't my friend ....I will never give up......he is tooo precious to me!!

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Nico!!! You are an amazing woman and poetess. This is very inspirational. Thank you for writing this. As you said, "Love is hard work", but when it works right it is the most beautiful experience in the world.
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