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Tomorrow is forever
by serenety L

Friday, October 17, 2003

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It's too late
to say
you want me
you love me
you need me


Yesterday is gone
nothing's left but sad and painful memories


Someone came into my life
turning my world upside down
taking all the love you threw away


Yesterday and you are past
Tomorrow and him are forever


 



 

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Reviewed by Sandie Angel 11/1/2003
Sounds like a message you have for someone. Straight to the point! Ouch!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 10/31/2003
Never too late Nico, enjoyed reading this, so romantic, "tomorrow and him are forever." wishing you the best and forgeting the rest. hug G
Reviewed by Rodd Jokre 10/21/2003
Quick and to the point! Bravo!
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 10/19/2003
Fantastic write....excellent!!!!
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) 10/19/2003
Excellant work Serenety!
Whatever it is/was you needed to release/ to let go you did it here beautifully!
~Nikki~
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 10/19/2003
You got "over the hump" I gather. Good!
Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington 10/19/2003
"B-R-A-V-O!!!"

~Jackie~
Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang 10/18/2003
I am so very happy for you!
"Tomorrow is forever"
Tell that old fool where to go!
Lotsa Love,
Becca in Roanoke, Texas
Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader) 10/18/2003
One always manages to rise from the ashes when love goes wrong. usually when you least expect it to happen. Lovely write
Reviewed by P. Michaels 10/18/2003
Serenty L,

I loved the bit of wisdom you placed on your biography page. This poem "Tomorrow is forever" is excellent. Thank you for reading mine and for your nice comments.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 10/18/2003
I am happy for you serenety!!

love Tinka
Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader) 10/18/2003
Excellent poetry.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 10/17/2003
Wow! Nico, this is a gem, you really nailed this and did it with flair!
Reviewed by jude forese 10/17/2003
you consolidate this poem brilliantly!
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 10/17/2003
A superb write!
Glad to read you again......
Reviewed by Dale Clark 10/17/2003
Those last lines are classic. Super piece!
Reviewed by Jack Roberts 10/17/2003
Wonderful write Serenety!

"Yesterday and you are past
Tomorrow and him are forever"

Jack
Reviewed by Trixie Love 10/17/2003
His loss is someone
else's gain...

Great write...


Trixie :)
Reviewed by Dana Matthews (Reader) 10/17/2003
*HIGH FIVE* ...whew I loved the feel of this one.
Great verse. Love the sentiment you kicked him in
the !.#! with.... ;o)

~Dana~
Reviewed by Sara Coslett 10/17/2003
All right, I love this...so positive...

"taking all the love you threw away

Yesterday and you are past
Tomorrow and him are forever"

What a wonderful concept.
Love,
Sara
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 10/17/2003
Excellent, I loved this, especially today,

Reindeer
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