|Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic
|hmmm...your lady is one lucky gal..isn't she?
what can I say?
everything is just right!..just right!!!
|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|Super work !!!!|
|Reviewed by g g (Reader)
|I need a new job LOL
Hugs and happy 4th
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
|One word "STEAMY"
Good thing my ac is on...lol
|Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
|and no one even noticed that the drapes were not quite closed and the boss was standing there watching the whole episode.
She was fired on the spot.
Sorry I couldn't resist that...wow,what a red hot spunky poem.
Ten out of ten for your fantastic imagination.This is one of the best erotic poems I have read around here.
Best wishes from
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|You bring a whole new meaning to working at the office........hmmm maybe this is why I trained to be a secretary :-) Great write!|
|Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
|I'm clearing the desk off for a fantasy like that to come my way. You've blown my mind again gentle man. :0)|
|Reviewed by serenety L
|What company are you working again????
Erotic write my dear. Love it.
|Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
|Wow!! If I'd known I'd read something like this when I returned, I'd have made the time to come back to the den sooner!! Well...as they say, 'better late then never!!'
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|Whew...cold shower time...:):)
|Reviewed by Marlene Dawn
|A very vivid fantasy....well done
|Reviewed by jude forese
|extrememly hot times at the orifice ;)|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Wow..Hot, nice fantasy,
|Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
|yes, what a dream, sir...!!|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|who needs reality!!|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|naughty aren't you....|
|Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
|Ummm, this is filled with some intense imagery! I am smiling at Nancy's comment!
What a fantasy indeed!
|Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations
|Fantasies can be terribly distracting... **smile**|
|Reviewed by samantha mane (Reader)
|hummm, a sensual little trip.|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|A warm fantsy indeed! Has me fantasizing a very cold shower.|
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|With a fantasy like this one, who needs reality at all?|
|Reviewed by Nancy D.
|See why everyone wants that office job, excellent.