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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
7/6/2003 |
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hmmm...your lady is one lucky gal..isn't she?
what can I say?
Excellent write....
everything is just right!..just right!!!
Vesna |
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| Reviewed by Birdie Houston |
7/5/2003 |
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| Super work !!!! |
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| Reviewed by g g (Reader) |
7/4/2003 |
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I need a new job LOL
Excellent write(:
Hugs and happy 4th
Lady G. |
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| Reviewed by Trixie Love |
7/3/2003 |
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One word "STEAMY"
Good thing my ac is on...lol
Trixie :) |
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| Reviewed by Kay P Devenish |
7/3/2003 |
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and no one even noticed that the drapes were not quite closed and the boss was standing there watching the whole episode.
She was fired on the spot.
Sorry I couldn't resist that...wow,what a red hot spunky poem.
Ten out of ten for your fantastic imagination.This is one of the best erotic poems I have read around here.
Best wishes from
kay |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
7/2/2003 |
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| You bring a whole new meaning to working at the office........hmmm maybe this is why I trained to be a secretary :-) Great write! |
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| Reviewed by Evelyn Simon |
7/1/2003 |
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| I'm clearing the desk off for a fantasy like that to come my way. You've blown my mind again gentle man. :0) |
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| Reviewed by serenety L |
7/1/2003 |
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What company are you working again????
Erotic write my dear. Love it.
Nico |
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| Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan |
7/1/2003 |
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Wow!! If I'd known I'd read something like this when I returned, I'd have made the time to come back to the den sooner!! Well...as they say, 'better late then never!!'
Great write!
Jenni |
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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
6/30/2003 |
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Whew...cold shower time...:):)
Loved it!!!!!
~~Linda~~ |
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| Reviewed by Marlene Dawn |
6/30/2003 |
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A very vivid fantasy....well done
*Marlene* |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
6/30/2003 |
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| extrememly hot times at the orifice ;) |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
6/30/2003 |
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Wow..Hot, nice fantasy,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Dove (Reader) |
6/30/2003 |
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| yes, what a dream, sir...!! |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
6/30/2003 |
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| who needs reality!! |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
6/30/2003 |
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| naughty aren't you.... |
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| Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci |
6/30/2003 |
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Ummm, this is filled with some intense imagery! I am smiling at Nancy's comment!
What a fantasy indeed!
Hugs,
Maria |
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| Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations |
6/30/2003 |
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| Fantasies can be terribly distracting... **smile** |
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| Reviewed by samantha mane (Reader) |
6/30/2003 |
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| hummm, a sensual little trip. |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
6/30/2003 |
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| A warm fantsy indeed! Has me fantasizing a very cold shower. |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
6/30/2003 |
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| With a fantasy like this one, who needs reality at all? |
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| Reviewed by Nancy D. |
6/30/2003 |
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See why everyone wants that office job, excellent.
Nancy |
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