Sudden Storms, Swimming Holes
by Beth Elaine
Saturday, June 17, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
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In the Texas Hill Country, a storm can change everything familiar. The only constant, really, is constant change... |
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Several years in a row, we sought a secluded swimming hole Esconced by massive trees-- oaks, I think-- that must have brushed settlers and Indians as saplings. Cool and clear, The Frio River ran in dark catfish pools, then shallowed over boulders, stones, and pebbles Lovely to the eye, soothing to the ear, refreshing to skin. After last year's storms swelled the river, Which surely rushed like an angry wall, carrying animals and branches and trash, A massive tree toppled sideways in the stream, roots up-tilted. The concrete slab that had formed a pleasant picnic surface was flung as though a giant child angered at his plaything, hurling it into mid stream. The careless water , circled and eddied and flowed another way. The catfish found new hiding places in the roots of the ancient felled tree. That is the river, a combination of storm aftermath surrounded by constant, clear waters unconcerned with any debris. Our choice? We can stand on the bank and bicker, Decry the loss of our old swimming hole, Or jump into the strange, magical, new oasis, and plumb its depths, rejoicing that still, there is a place to swim with new secrets beckoning below the surface.
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| Reviewed by Evan Barnes |
7/14/2006 |
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| The picture was painted very clearly. Very beautiful! :D |
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| Reviewed by Karen Cino |
7/13/2006 |
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Beautiful imagery you have shared with us here.
Or jump into the
strange, magical, new oasis,
and plumb its depths, rejoicing that still,
there is a place to swim
with new secrets beckoning below the surface.
Lovely verse with a feeling of positive beginnings. Thanks for sharing.
Karen
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
6/25/2006 |
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| Ah, the swimming hole, you have described it so well, at least as well as I can remember. There were some fun times to ber had at the swimming hole. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
6/17/2006 |
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Bess,
Beautiful writing here; enjoyed reading this one!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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