|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|Sigh.. I fell right into this one, totally and willingly immersed. There may be pockets of places similar to this, but then someone has to go and blab. Mike, thank you, if for only this moment, to spend time in a head that thinks my thoughts and writes them so beautifully. Yes... "if only..." katy xox.|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Your dream sounds like paradise but if we humans lived the way we ought to, your "paradise" would come true. Thank you for this, Michael. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
You certainly put-it-all together with this excellent write!
|Reviewed by Amira van Kerk
|That sounds like paradise to me.
Pity that we can't go back there.
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|This is so powerful.. Excellent poem and message....|
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|Like Vesna stated,,,believe and d o your part and pass it on...then the other fella does the same and passes it on and before you know it! It's no longer a dreaM TO WAKEN FROM. I'm prepared and always ready to do my part and like you I want it today!
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|..one day ..one day kid this will be just as you described...it will..period!!
I hope the Big Guy is listening...
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Take me there now please!;-) Beautifully dreamed
and transcribed! If only!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|a dream to aspire to ... superbly crafted ...|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Yes Mike a dream, one that I would like to see, but alas as long as man lives here on this earth, it won't happen anytime too soon, but a beautiful thought nonetheless...Peace is the ONLY way, Ed & Rufuz|
|Reviewed by Theresa Koch
|Wonderful vision of perfection...|
|Reviewed by Reginald Birch (Reader)
|Ah, if only, Enjoyed.
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|A beautiful dream and poem. Wonderful flow and rhyme and images of perfection.|