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| Reviewed by Silke Lance, Dr. Ph (Reader) |
12/5/2004 |
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| Very well written. |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
10/13/2004 |
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| great Michael , I loved your expression here. I too am writing another book but I give into writing my poems quite often. Some day I'll finish. And the chores, I only fix whats broke, the rest just lingers. G |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
10/8/2004 |
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Weekend morning one of two
mental lists of what to do
My friend....powerful opening lines....and then I loved the way you ended this write....its a joy to read you....cheers...love n luck....BHUWAN |
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| Reviewed by Tami Ryan |
10/3/2004 |
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Ooooooy, surely, we can all relate to this one. I'm supposed to be painting my apartment, but my muse keeps reminding me that it'll still be there next weekend. And, unfortunately, it is.
Good expression, Michael. Thank you. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/2/2004 |
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| and you did well! |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
10/2/2004 |
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| Just go crazy. It sure is fun fun fun.. |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
10/2/2004 |
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| And it is one of the best I have read of late, Mike...speaks of life in suburbia...Peace, Ed & rufuz |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
10/2/2004 |
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And what a wonderful poem it is! You really captured
this well.Great juxtaposition! |
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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
10/2/2004 |
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Aww this was refreshing to read this morning!
Excellent write , Michael
Sometimes the chore's just have to wait..
WRITE THAT BOOK!
~Linda |
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| Reviewed by Diane Spill (Reader) |
10/2/2004 |
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Bravo..
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
10/2/2004 |
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love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lolol
wonderful!!!!!!
and i know the feeling even tho i am not an author....just a poet......
they summon........u respond!
lol
pax A |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
10/2/2004 |
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| You sure did, but I hope you find time to work on Chapter 5, too! |
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