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Simply put ... I miss you.
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Missing you way too much,
lack of looks, want for touch.
Talk events that played out,
missing you is no doubt.
Changed routines were OK,
wonder what you would say.
Doing things I once ignored
sleeping in, no one snores.
Batteries are now refreshed,
body charged, no distress.
Missing you way too much,
lack of looks, want for touch.
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| Reviewed by Katherine Chandler |
5/18/2007 |
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This poem really touched me deeply.
Short and to the point, simply
stating you miss someone. I could
feel the emotions -- quite the visual
for this reader.
Hugs`n smiles,
Kate |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
5/15/2007 |
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How sadly revealing, you have touched my heart.
Be safe,
Lasrem |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
5/15/2007 |
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Heartfelt offering!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
5/15/2007 |
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To miss someone and to admit to missing them is a cry of love and an offer of love that is real. Well done my friend...good sincere write.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
5/15/2007 |
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| Sweet and emotive, enjoyed. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
5/15/2007 |
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| simply put- i enjoyed this write |
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