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  I Tried To Write A Poem
by Michael Charles Messineo
Wednesday, March 26, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.

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Because this is what happens sometimes.


Photo by Reggie Kanasut


 

I tried to write this poem

and changed it way too much,

then counted all the syllables

and learned the rhythm sucks.

 

I used my thesaurus

upgraded all the words,

poetic justice don’t apply

this smells like walrus turds.

 

I flipped around the lines

dissected every meaning,

then took out this and that,

with mental veto screening.

 

This is the last stanza.

Won’t let my readers down.

So I’ll end this little ditty

Fade out til there’s no soun...

 




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Reviewed by steve Chering 8/12/2009
POETRY CAN BE SO BORING' THIS'LL DO NICELY THOUGH
Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G 4/10/2009
YOU did just that too, never saw that tactic, loved it... missing "d"
hmmm... You clever guy you!
Great poem! I loved the feelings it emitted!
Awesome picture too, MYSTERIOUS and BEAUTIFUL in ONE!
WRITE ON~!

Warmest Blessings of Love and Peace, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo
Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain-Baello 3/1/2009
Hello Michael,

Bend the rules, you can. It's the content, not the form - just like a lady. This review is a year late but the poem still rocks...the graphics too.

Cynthia
Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle 2/11/2009
An enjoyable and clever poem to read,take care

Edwin
Reviewed by neerja gandhi 4/1/2008
wow,great work,quite charming to read. loved it. neerja
Reviewed by Leann Marshall 3/30/2008
This one makes me laugh and makes me happy. You would be a stimulating conversationalist. Loved it, Michael
Leann
Reviewed by Felix Perry 3/28/2008
I like it and I think I can almost see you smiling as you hit the enter key...

Fee
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 3/27/2008
Think you did a fine job at depicting how much work goes into writing....

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Bernice Lakota 3/27/2008
Very clever...I still don't know the technicalities of writing a poem, I recently learned there are quite a bit....I just write unti...lol
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 3/27/2008
Don't ever count....just write and post...and be happy-clappy...like when you did this one!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Edwin Larson 3/27/2008
Fun clever write...walrus turds? lol
Reviewed by Rafiriio Daniels 3/26/2008
Ha! I agree clever!
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 3/26/2008
so very clever!!
Reviewed by Carin Spirit 3/26/2008
This is cute! I gave up on trying to be a poet, I only write what I am feeling at any given moment. It's just my way of thinking aloud and putting things out there.

Thank you for sharing. Love and Warmth, Carin' Spirit
Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle 3/26/2008
Michael,
How I can relate and honestly say, "Been there, done that..." far too many times. The walrus turds references leaves quite the visual. I'm glad you were able to finish this poem and share it, though. The adorable nature of this was well worth the struggles to find the words!!!
Have a great night,
Jill
Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER 3/26/2008
Don't stop now, you're on a roll. Jasmin Horst
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 3/26/2008
You did it yay...(Giggles)..stay safe and well...Hugssssssssss
Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz 3/26/2008
congratulations you wrote your poem... cute!!!

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