|Reviewed by david cleaves
|braap fucking yes|
|Reviewed by Joni Stewart-Hague
|hahahahaha - I really enjoyed this (does that make me a child...at heart ? ::grin::)
Very well done -- as all your writing is. No wonder I've begun 'tracking' you ::chuckle::
Thanks for sharing your talent with us.
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
|This is a wise way to introduce science to children. It did prod my imagination.
You Poet, have delivered a good message through the right vehicle.
Thank You for adding value to Poetry treasure.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
|Awww! This is great and would make our jobs as mothers a piece of cake. Well, with the picking everything up part. Or everything would just be on the ceiling...lol! Loved it!
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|LOL made me remember the one time I fell up the stairs and did get skinned!|
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
A really fun poem Londis...Truly enjoyed....ty, Dani
|Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
|Cute poem for children but I enjoyed allot.
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|Yeah, I don't like what gravity is doing to me! And I think Tinka has a good point... hee.... great write, G!
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|If up was down and down was up...just think how lucky men would feel!!
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was sweet and light, a pure joy to read!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|enjoyed the read; thank you, lonny, for posting! :D (((HUGS))) and love, your texas friend, karen lynn.|
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|This is cute! Loved the lightness of this. Enjoyed. Lisa|