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| Reviewed by david cleaves |
10/13/2008 |
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| braap fucking yes |
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| Reviewed by Joni Stewart-Hague |
9/29/2003 |
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hahahahaha - I really enjoyed this (does that make me a child...at heart ? ::grin::)
Very well done -- as all your writing is. No wonder I've begun 'tracking' you ::chuckle::
Thanks for sharing your talent with us.
Joni |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
9/28/2003 |
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This is a wise way to introduce science to children. It did prod my imagination.
You Poet, have delivered a good message through the right vehicle.
Thank You for adding value to Poetry treasure.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) |
9/27/2003 |
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Awww! This is great and would make our jobs as mothers a piece of cake. Well, with the picking everything up part. Or everything would just be on the ceiling...lol! Loved it!
Thanks,
Teresa Emilie |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
9/26/2003 |
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| LOL made me remember the one time I fell up the stairs and did get skinned! |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
9/26/2003 |
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LOL! True!
A really fun poem Londis...Truly enjoyed....ty, Dani |
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| Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader) |
9/26/2003 |
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Cute poem for children but I enjoyed allot.
Taylor |
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| Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) |
9/26/2003 |
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Yeah, I don't like what gravity is doing to me! And I think Tinka has a good point... hee.... great write, G!
In Spirit,
Bear |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
9/26/2003 |
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If up was down and down was up...just think how lucky men would feel!!
lol!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
9/26/2003 |
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This was sweet and light, a pure joy to read!
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
9/26/2003 |
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| enjoyed the read; thank you, lonny, for posting! :D (((HUGS))) and love, your texas friend, karen lynn. |
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| Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers |
9/26/2003 |
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| This is cute! Loved the lightness of this. Enjoyed. Lisa |
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