|Reviewed by Marion
|It's beautiful... as all what you write.. the rythme and the power of words ... wooohoo..i hope it will be soon a song we will all sing!! carry on ;)|
|Reviewed by scudder
|yep..... amazing stuff!!!!! can i have that drink you promised me now??? :P|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Love the rhyme and flow of this one. The power of words!|
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Yes John, I had to march through this poem one more time and still it confounds me. Very very deep it is. Bill|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|"...Ask question listen and preach ..."
It's that preaching that is a pain in the arse. [smiles] Well done, I like the rhythm of the verses.
|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
|Oh! WHAT a message in here! I enjoyed this to the very last word and so much I might add, that I had to read it again.