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(Egg photo by Ciekawedzdjecie... a name as hard to spell as my poetic musings seem to be to hatch, today... LOL! Enjoy, and have a delicious Sunday... scrambled at your pleasure, or truly sunny-side up!)
xoxox
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To lay or not to… hatch
And then there were nests of days like that when embryonic poems stared at one another and she at them, all suspended in the vagueness of egg-shaped conditions with hard and yet frail walls of words, and silence, as thick as the whites of eggs are, cushioning the yolks inside.
Still, they were better than those other days of words screaming to hatch; when all would try to squeeze through a passage much too tight throwing at each other fallacies of exclusivity - again egg-shaped, but of a solidity encasing mere denial of its own frailty about to crack and spread glutinous perceptions of sameness side by side.
Oh, dilemmas of poetic fecundation, of quills yet to reveal the colours to fly or not to fly, and the ripe dynamics of the feathers behind and to soar or not beyond them…what poems, what birds, if any, were laid, indeed, to live? There are days like this… when you, words, seem to be meant, and she, not to hatch at all; and be simply scrambled, while fresh, with a pinch of salt, to be eaten by no one but… … the poet herself, sitting, plate on her lap, by some unuttered, wistful synonym of window - and staring at those cacophonic hens the muses turned into, vacantly pecking at a blank sheet of paper outside.
(Burp...)
© 2007 Alexandra* ~ OneLight*®
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| Reviewed by Taylor Ryan |
2/8/2007 |
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Alexandra...this is so wonderfully and cleverly written and a poem with which I can totally identify. I so admire your gift.
xo Taylor |
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| Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader) |
2/5/2007 |
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| This is a great metaphorical poem. I really admire you for such writing. Victor |
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
2/5/2007 |
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Alexandra, minha Trenginha ...
This is so, SO Clever and so funny! Oh, how I love to devour your words. (Burp...) You always spice things just right. Could I have another helping please?
Your (Burp...) Admirer,
Joseph |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
2/5/2007 |
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Alexandra,
Your words are delicious and completely satisfy this reader: the thoughts you boldly season in well prepared ways: yes. May I please have another serving???
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
WELL DONE!!!!!!!! |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
2/4/2007 |
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"Oh, dilemmas of poetic fecundation, of quills
yet to reveal the colours to fly or not to fly"
i just luv how you evaluate the synopsis of the poetic urge to create ...
well done and raw ... |
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| Reviewed by Leland Waldrip |
2/4/2007 |
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The words came out eggzacly right. LOL
Love and {{{{{{{{{{{{{{hugs}}}}}}}}}}}}},
Leland |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
2/4/2007 |
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Alexandra,
Nice reading you again also. I have always loved your exquisite word usage but I must admit sometimes a bit over this old man's head (lol)I seem to like my eggs hard boiled these days with only a pinch of pepper (no salt) |
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| Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten |
2/4/2007 |
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I am a hatcher! Therefore I lay...LOL! This was so good, challeging the birth of a poem, to bring it to life or not...I love when nature teases my mind with muse!
Famtastic!
Love and peace~
Kimmy~ |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
2/4/2007 |
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| The imagery here is truly captivating, Alexandra. And Ciekawedzdjecie's photo is very captivating, too. Being Polish, I seem to be able to pronounce it very easily, but it is quite a spelling challenge for anyone! |
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