(Image © by Aimea)
It feels like a… yes, a whisper;
a light, or maybe its inception
through that gap that occurs just before our hands touch;
Then, it is dark -
no gap, just skin to skin;
it feels like a… yes, a whisper,
from a second ago to now, just before our lips touch -
And we become the kiss;
the light, again, or maybe its inception
through the gap that occurs in the dark
just before breaths come together -
And silence feels like… a whisper;
- © 2008 Alexandra* ~ OneLight*®
Hello, AD, it’s been a while! Some updates will follow, soon – and meanwhile, love & hugs to all!
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|Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
|A beautiful poem.take care :-)
|Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford
|So very beautiful. I'm sure I speak for all when I say welcome back, you've been very much missed.|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|And such a lovely whisper of poetic expression this is, Alexandra. It is very nice to read you again. Love and best wishes to you,
|Reviewed by A PAX
|beautiful.........and so very much your signature style........:) pax A|
|Reviewed by Art Sun
|Nice poem Alexandra...your thoughts show that deep emotion attained within the essence of each combined expression...the simpleness of each thought defines the depth of your work...
an enjoyable return...
|Reviewed by jude forese
|smooth and sensual ...
los saludos… pueden subsistencia de la vida usted activo y bien ...
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Alexandra, This is so softly romantic and loving. You are an extraordinary person. Welcome back, surely have missed you.
Much peace, love,and light,
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Good to see you back Alexandra and with such a stunningly soft sensual write that heats up the night...
|Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis
|Beautiful, Alexandra*; it almost feels like a companion piece to my "There." I particularly love "through that gap that occurs just before our hands touch." This line captures the anticipation of "becoming." To be aware of this "gap" is to be fully in the present moment in a very conscious way - savoring each step and not rushing toward an end. It is, in its relative way, the "journey."|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Oh, how I've missed you: I love the imagery in this, particularly in the second stanza: gorgeous!! Welcome back.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.