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| Reviewed by Mike Mirabella (Reader) |
6/8/2011 |
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| viva la difference! |
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| Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader) |
6/8/2011 |
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| YOUNG LOVE...SO TRUE THE DELICATE LADY AND THE JOCK..I DO REMEMBER...BEAUTIFUL WRITE, VIVIAN. ANNA |
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| Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader) |
6/4/2011 |
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| The ominous opening phrase rather sets the scene for this piece. The territory is well established but your acute observation of the subject brings the poem to life. The closing "Love Story" reference indicates that all did not end well. Ballerinas are aptly named iron butterflies so we may assume that she survived and prospered. |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
6/4/2011 |
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| "So much said about opposites attracting' and you say it very well. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
6/3/2011 |
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I appreciate the way you have presented the theme of "love" through your verses here, Vivian; substance to ponder upon. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
6/3/2011 |
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Fine point of view, Vivian,
the bringing together of differents
and their magnetic attraction.
John |
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| Reviewed by Joy Hale |
6/3/2011 |
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Sweet is the romance between the ballerina and the school jock, when opposited attract: told so well by the pen of Lady Vivian.
Joy L. Hale |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
6/3/2011 |
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| fun title.....love is unexplainable. nice write ~ Morgan |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
6/3/2011 |
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A tender and nostalgic pleasure to read!
I love to hear the words "I'm sorry" though, because they are charming.
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
6/3/2011 |
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Love is all to often inexplicable, Vivian. Yet, in the end,
me thinks, love attracts love. -gene. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
6/3/2011 |
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| There is not a doubt that opposites do attract and then, after they are wedded each one tries to turn the other one into what they weren't attracted to in the first place. Boggles the mind. |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
6/3/2011 |
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| Very Lovely indeed sweet lady...Hugsss |
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
6/3/2011 |
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An excellent write well done and told wonderfully as always Laura
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
6/3/2011 |
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| Beautifully penned and nostalgic. |
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| Reviewed by Richard King |
6/3/2011 |
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Vivian, Well done. This one brings back memories. Mostly good ones.
Thanks Dick |
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