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Fantasies of a.. Living.. Room
by Vivian L Dawson

Wednesday, June 22, 2011
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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The wind is moaning, awesome
waves amass, my lover takes me
away to where the dolphins play

Captivating lighthouse beams
moving so free, you kiss my lips
cresting my waves as bells ring
melodiously to attest our ecstasy

From the comfort of my living room
waking up, I look around...did I enter
the portrait for a night of bliss...or
longing for the rhythm of my waves,
will I find you on my sofa tonight
in my room for living in the now

(c) Fantasies of a..Living..Room
21June2011 Vivian L. Dawson

 

 

 

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Reviewed by Dark Knight 11/26/2012
be careful what you wish for
Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader) 6/27/2011
The water motif to suggest passion is well established but your use of language is quite original. The little mystery of why the lover is to be found on your sofa invites speculation in the reader. An engaging effort.
Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader) 6/24/2011
fantasy or dream..love is. keep going my friend, anna
Reviewed by neerja gandhi 6/23/2011
fantasies..at times do turn in reality Vivian..nice write..enjoyed it. Best wishes.neerja
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 6/23/2011
Most captivating, as is the portrait on the wall.
Reviewed by John Flanagan 6/23/2011
Vivian,
A poem of spiritual and sensuous travel.

John
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 6/22/2011
". . . or living in the now."

Nice. Captured surrealism and reality all in one fell swoop. Gotta love it.
Reviewed by Laura Fall 6/22/2011
A Delightful poem well done indeed Laura



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