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Divine Panorama
by Vivian L Dawson
Sunday, July 17, 2011
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Paint your shower with the essence of lavender oils
light the candles casting rainbows for shadows
luxurious bathing to compliment such glorious setting

Musky love making scents conjoined in the shower
continuing the journey for an evening of discovery

A virtual cascading waterfall over God's creations
likened to Adam and Eve before an apple was eaten

Contentment of being in a Garden of Eden Eternal
innocence fruitful with no shame
viewing the divine panorama of our naked bodies

(c) Divine Panorama 17July2011
Vivian L Dawson





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Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader) 7/22/2011
This is a timely reminder to all your male readers that a shower isn't necessarily a purely functional piece of equipment.
Vivid imagery packed into an economical little piece.
Reviewed by Joy Hale 7/22/2011
The setting you portray here is so elegant, complete with candles glowing, scented bath oils, a lover close by to share in the viewing of the "divine panorama of our naked bodies." Sensual bliss!

Joy L. Hale
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 7/21/2011
Light the candles and watch them melt!!!
Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader) 7/19/2011
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 7/19/2011
Breath of fresh air...sweet aroma fills my senses! LOVE THIS~
Reviewed by Laura Fall 7/19/2011
Beautifully written poetry as always a great read Laura
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 7/18/2011
LOVELY!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 7/18/2011
Sounds like a good place to be in this Heat Wave.
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 7/18/2011
Uplifting and divine poem!
Lavender is just the thing.
Reviewed by William Bonilla 7/17/2011
artistically sensuous and a pleasure to read
Peace be with you

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 7/17/2011
This is sensually delicious!!! Love the photo. Good one, Viv!

Peace, love and light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by John Flanagan 7/17/2011
A sensuous delight, Vivian;
love your language choices here,
especially the use of 'conjoined'

Reviewed by Cliff Long (Reader) 7/17/2011
Aaah! What luxury, what bliss! Just melting in your words, the lavender oil essence poring into my body, refreshing my spirit, mind and body. How can one be so decadent and wholesome and pure at the same time. Ask Lady Vivian.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 7/17/2011
I dying here from the combination of pain and a pain pill which is making me loopy, but not stopping the pain yet, but I can still tell I have read a damn good poem.

The short, simple poems sometimes are the best, mine today isn't short or simple, so it is a delight to read one which is. That picture is fantastic also. Yep.
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