|Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
|This is a timely reminder to all your male readers that a shower isn't necessarily a purely functional piece of equipment.
Vivid imagery packed into an economical little piece.
|Reviewed by Joy Hale
|The setting you portray here is so elegant, complete with candles glowing, scented bath oils, a lover close by to share in the viewing of the "divine panorama of our naked bodies." Sensual bliss!
Joy L. Hale
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Light the candles and watch them melt!!!|
|Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)
|BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN VIVIAN ANOTHER WONDERFUL READ. KEEP GOING MYF FRIEND, ANNA|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Breath of fresh air...sweet aroma fills my senses! LOVE THIS~|
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|Beautifully written poetry as always a great read Laura
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|LOVELY!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Sounds like a good place to be in this Heat Wave.|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Uplifting and divine poem!
Lavender is just the thing.
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|artistically sensuous and a pleasure to read
Peace be with you
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|This is sensually delicious!!! Love the photo. Good one, Viv!
Peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|A sensuous delight, Vivian;
love your language choices here,
especially the use of 'conjoined'
|Reviewed by Cliff Long (Reader)
|Aaah! What luxury, what bliss! Just melting in your words, the lavender oil essence poring into my body, refreshing my spirit, mind and body. How can one be so decadent and wholesome and pure at the same time. Ask Lady Vivian.|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|I dying here from the combination of pain and a pain pill which is making me loopy, but not stopping the pain yet, but I can still tell I have read a damn good poem.
The short, simple poems sometimes are the best, mine today isn't short or simple, so it is a delight to read one which is. That picture is fantastic also. Yep.