|Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)
|BEFORE CROSSING...,MOST DEFINITELY LOOK WITH CAUTION. ANOTHER WONDERFUL WRITE TO SHARE WITH US. KEEP GOING MISS VIVIAN...LOVIN YOUR WORDS, ANNA|
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|love the last line in this very true piece, Vivian! ~ Morgan|
|Reviewed by neerja gandhi
|beauuuutifuulll....one must follow the love's applications... :)best wishes.neerja|
|Reviewed by Joy Hale
|"Never jaywalking loves avenue" I love the connection between the warnings of old and the urgency of ignoring those very words and loving you today! A brilliant poem rich with images. WELL DONE!!
Joy L. Hale
|Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
|I like the imperative voice in this poem. We would all do well to remember that elementary school advice before making life changing decisions. Stylistically a little gem.|
|Reviewed by Richard King
|I really like this one... 2 thumbs up, wish I had 3.
Thanks Vivian, Dick
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Sage Advice, Indeed.|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|This is so wise, Vivian,
you are so wise..
i wish i could follow..
but i'm a bit of a mad ole thing...
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|A wonderful poem indeed Laura
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|You tuned your heartstrings to a loving pitch and strummed the chords of everlasting love with beautiful, true, and mesmerizing words you sang so eloquently. After you finished your piece, you stood, the grand ballroom clapped, whistled, and stomped their feet in praise as you took your bow.|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Vivian, I am telling you, this is masterful, it speaks of wisdom from the heart...love should be embraced with rules to keep it on a pedestal...A+