Daisy, daisy does He love Me
by Vivian L Dawson
Sunday, August 07, 2011
Rated "G" by the Author.
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does he Love me Not?
Just a childhood game?
I question by plucking petals
one by one
What will the outcome be
ever growing in well-being green
not under a burnt orange sky
Will a sun appear overwhelming
in yellow intellect before all the
petals fall in disarray among the
weeds before I am finished
Or, will He just call and tell me
that he loves Me, and can't live
without me...as am I to ponder in
my living garden of daisy colors
(c) Daisy, daisy does He love Me
04August2011 Vivian L. Dawson
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|Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
|Brought a smile to my face, this one. I remember the girls at school playing this game, I suspect the more numerate cheated a little on the outcome. Hope you didn't have to cheat.
The poem just goes to prove that you don't need some lofty subject to inspire you.
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|A lovely poem and pic, Vivian.|
|Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)
|ANOTHER WONDERFUL POEM BRINGS BACK CHILDHOOD MEMORIES OF PLUCKING THOSE DAISIES AND MAKING WISHES...HUG ANNA|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Warm, yummy poem that leaves honey bees buzzing in the breeze~|
|Reviewed by Joy Hale
|A fun read of springtime and love. Spring is the time when a mans thoughts turn to love... does he or does he not? The eternal question. Joy L. hale|
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|A wonderful poem indeed Laura
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|The age-old question without an age-old answer, Vivian.|