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A night Not to Remember
by Vivian L Dawson

Friday, August 19, 2011
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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~Now my Dilemma~

Why oh Why did our love go awry want me back
what do I feel

For it was a night not to remember,
so erratic was my heart beat
...confusion running rampant...
when you said "goodbye"

Promises of the white rose,
your offer of purity to restore
But, do I dare trust again,
pensive are my thoughts

At first glance...
it would be so easy to Fall back
into our Summer of romance

Are You truly sorry,
can you take my hand
and be only mine

If my heart "takes" your name,
will you grow old with me

Can you answer? with
till death does us part

(c) A night Not to Remember
17August2011 Vivian L. Dawson




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Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader) 8/26/2011
Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader) 8/24/2011
It may have been a night not to remember but it is obviously still on your mind. Trust has to be earned but can he earn trust while you are apart? A nice take on the age old dilemma of wayward lovers.
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 8/22/2011
Trust is powerful, once broken, is it truly ever fixed? Can one completely move on?...ranting in my mind...great poem!
Reviewed by Joem Webster 8/22/2011
Another great poem that I can relate to. Thank you so much for sharing your poetry. It really means a lot to me. Love, Joem
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 8/20/2011
A heartfelt question, indeed.
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 8/20/2011
VERY NICE!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Cindy Schaffer (Reader) 8/19/2011
Okay, Sounds Like A Serious Romance, Lady Vivian. Beautiful! Cindy E. H. Schaffer :D))
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 8/19/2011
Beautiful reflection ~
And, well he'd be awfully lucky to get to be your companion, Vivian, so you make sure he's authentic and it does sound like you love him.
Reviewed by Laura Fall 8/19/2011
Words spoken so heartfelt as I hope all works out in the long run my friend as always great written poetry Laura
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 8/19/2011
People can be truly remorseful, and the only way to find that out is to give them a chance to prove it. On the other hand, "once bitten, twice shy."
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 8/19/2011
Definitely a dilemma, always use your gut to make your choice, the heart is too tender. You have captured this wonderfully. Everyone can relate on some level for there are always questions to be answered when it comes to relationships...Good luck on this one..:)

Much peace, love and light,
Amber "V"
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