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Barely Weaned for this Hallowed
by Vivian L Dawson
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It is not easy being a crustacean
in a pot...Am I the trick or the treat?

Not quite sure what this is all about!
Perhaps needing to
appear as a cute
bug not to eat instead

Will I grow up to find out
what I am to
be? from the
many faces of a spooky
Hallowed Ween


(c) Barely Weaned for this Hallowed
22October2011
Vivian L Dawson

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Reviewed by John Flanagan
Vivian,
This is very clever and charming indeed;
beautiful words and pic.
reminds me in a way of how some mothers
place their toddlers in buckets of water
(water up to the chest only!) during the hot
season here in parts of Asia.

John
Reviewed by Christine Alwin
What a cute wee one, (looks like a little lobster) :)
Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Hope this turned out OK in the end; it's a bit worrying to note that the grown up in the picture is wearing a chef's jacket. The baby does look good enough to eat it must be said. Cute little poem too!
Reviewed by Christine Tsen
So adorable!
I love the cleverness, the playful title!
Blessings,
Christine
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
lol. Love the pic. A poor crab about to be boiled? At such a young age. Enjoyed. Liz
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
It is not easy being a bug
in a pot...

It sure ain't!
Reviewed by Liana Margiva
VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Cute pic & poem...e
Reviewed by Laura Fall
This is absolutely adorable poetry well done my friend Laura
Reviewed by Cliff Long (Reader)
A nice trick, and it saves diapers.
I hope that you find out what to be when you grow up.
I'm looking forward to finding out when I grow up too.
Reviewed by Joy Hale
The bug looks like he/she has a lot of questions also! So cute!

Joy L. Hale
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
A scared bug it appears to me.
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