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Careful Not to Sleep so Sound
by Vivian L Dawson
Sunday, October 30, 2011
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A sea a maze around me
I seek thee tempting of the wind
with relenting sensuous sounds

Careful not to sleep so sound
for I come to seduce you like
a willful shadow on your soul

Wild eyed to be engaging in love
a purpose of my wingless flight

Touch yourself and sense me of flaming
whispers with sparks ascending to your heart
where sails of truth acknowledge the journey

Submerge these depths like shafts of light
and indulge the stealth of my reach to be
free of all inhibitions, for I am your temptress
of reachable visions inseparable of my host

(c) Careful Not to Sleep so Sound
30October2011
Vivian L. Dawson

 

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Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader) 11/10/2011
A siren song if ever I saw one; the promise, irresistible and sweet, but nonetheless fraught with danger. A clever theme, well written
Reviewed by Felix Perry 10/31/2011
The hidden and secret sensuality of this one seems to centre around love and satisfaction that the touching of mind and heart can accomplish. Very good indeed.
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Reviewed by Andy Turner 10/31/2011
Gosh, and such a host.
Pssst, I'm in the potting shed, just potted the last inhibition.
Now to sow some seeds.
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 10/31/2011
Erotic, fierce, and gorgeously earthy Vivian!
"for I am your temptress of reachable visions inseparable of my host" is amazing!
Blessings,
Christine
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 10/31/2011
From the opening line to the last, your poem is wrapped with intensity, enjoyed this very much, beautiful~
Reviewed by Joy Hale 10/31/2011
Ah, the temptress years for sensual love; free of all inhibitions, she bids you not to sleep too long, but to be aware of her touch in the night! Awaken and tend to the needs of your sultry temptress! A very erotic and compelling offering, Vivian. Well done!

Joy L. Hale
Reviewed by Jon Willey 10/31/2011
Sleep! Vivian with a sultry temptress within my reach, sleep would be an erasure mark in my lexicon. "Wild eyed to be engaging in love a perpose of my wingless flight", simmers with passion -- worry not, sleep is an intentional ommission in such circumstances - I bid you love and peace -- Jon Michael
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 10/31/2011
Quite a passionate piece, Vivian.
Reviewed by John Flanagan 10/31/2011
Be my temptress any time, Vivian!

John
Reviewed by Laura Fall 10/30/2011
So beautifully written indeed Laura
Reviewed by Cliff Long (Reader) 10/30/2011
Lovely temptress. You've got a good start on rewriting Homer's Odyssey. You are modern Grecian goddess.
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