|Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
|A siren song if ever I saw one; the promise, irresistible and sweet, but nonetheless fraught with danger. A clever theme, well written|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|The hidden and secret sensuality of this one seems to centre around love and satisfaction that the touching of mind and heart can accomplish. Very good indeed.
|Reviewed by Andy Turner
|Gosh, and such a host.
Pssst, I'm in the potting shed, just potted the last inhibition.
Now to sow some seeds.
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Erotic, fierce, and gorgeously earthy Vivian!
"for I am your temptress of reachable visions inseparable of my host" is amazing!
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|From the opening line to the last, your poem is wrapped with intensity, enjoyed this very much, beautiful~|
|Reviewed by Joy Hale
|Ah, the temptress years for sensual love; free of all inhibitions, she bids you not to sleep too long, but to be aware of her touch in the night! Awaken and tend to the needs of your sultry temptress! A very erotic and compelling offering, Vivian. Well done!
Joy L. Hale
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|Sleep! Vivian with a sultry temptress within my reach, sleep would be an erasure mark in my lexicon. "Wild eyed to be engaging in love a perpose of my wingless flight", simmers with passion -- worry not, sleep is an intentional ommission in such circumstances - I bid you love and peace -- Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Quite a passionate piece, Vivian.|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|Be my temptress any time, Vivian!
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|So beautifully written indeed Laura
|Reviewed by Cliff Long (Reader)
|Lovely temptress. You've got a good start on rewriting Homer's Odyssey. You are modern Grecian goddess.|