|Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
|The weekly laundry as an allegory for life, you like your metaphors Vivian. We know we must not air our dirty washing in public; does that mean we should air our clean washing............? And why green clothesline?|
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Reminds me of a recent trip to Mazatlan. Patrick|
|Reviewed by Janna Hill
|"Being ever so careful not to let your clothes carry you away".
|Reviewed by Joy Hale
|Laundry lines on tall buildings? No. A most interesting poem with many hidden meanings for one to search out. Very good work; I enjoyed this multi faceted offering.
Joy L. Hale
|Reviewed by D. Vaineo
|Vivian, We've all done it at least once---Well done.
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Wonderful layering of meaning here, and artistic style ~
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Much Food For Thought Here, Vivian.|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|Always love to see laundry in a back
garden but never on buildings as we have to
have here in S'pore since most of us live
vertically; enjoyed your metaphor here,
Vivian, it's strong and interesting.
|Reviewed by FRANK UNDERWRITTEN
|a sensational scaling to a fine-formed summit...
"someone who you are not"... wonderful negation reminding us of Polonius's admonition, "To thine own self be true." Charming, indeed, Vivian.
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Do u also do windows...I may have a job for you...e|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|This brings to mind that old saying but alas it also reminds me of my mothers clothes always being on the line, no dryers back then just a rope tied around two pulleys.
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Blue skies, clean heart :) (My Mom has a cabin in the northwoods, Maytag ringer washer and out to dry on the line, it is so theraputic and refreshing to do the laundry up there)|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner
|Well done. Though I hate driving through London and seeing clothes on thousands of lines.|
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|Truly a unique and clever write well done as always great poetry Laura