|Reviewed by Janna Hill
|Another stirring write Vivian, thank you.
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|The title is definitely me...e|
|Reviewed by RWEHAVING FUN
|though the feet may be bare, what of the soul... this verse hits the notes of a soul whose revelation conceals much more than it reveals... and amid the lap dance of "worthless words" lies an understanding that underlies the colour of the "absence of understanding"... gone through this poem like Merwin's "thread through a needle--everything...stitched with" the colour of that absence... hence the dilemma at the close...
a fine conundrum of a relationship is herein depicted...
|Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
|You have voiced a very common predicament here, to stay or to move on. Somebody should have worked out the odds by now to help those of us who dither. I'm sure the safe choice is to proceed, bare feet or not.|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|I hope Stormy Weather soon leads to Bright, Sunny Days.|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|Great gods of love, I thought I had received a Dear John a few days ago, but it was just a combination of her not making herself very clean and me reading it with disbelieving eyes. You title make perfect sense to me, Vivian.|
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
|Vivid emotions raw waiting yet not wanting forever..
Splendid writing ~ Lady Vivian
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by jude forese
|proceeding with bare feet can be a dangerous move especially when the shards of shattered emotions are the floor walked upon ...
emotionally potent poem, Vivian ...
|Reviewed by Cliff Long (Reader)
|Awesome! A work of art! And I understand every word. Words of lost love stumbling picking yourself up and moving on to your next love.|