|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Just a nother Vivian masterpiece...you never disappoint your readers, lovely work as always..
Peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Portrait a sunrise and Lasso a moon....
I Love You...never to falter after sunset,
will he be mine in luminous light to surround
Truly romantic sentiments; I can relate, Vivian. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Now this is what I have missed..love it!|
|Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
|California is a great place for a love affair, all that sun, sand and whatever else folks get up to there. Even the Latino names have their own magic. Like this a lot..|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Vivid images of the California coast, San Juan Capistrano, the swallows, and a midnight rendezvous all wrapped up in a nice neat little poem.
|Reviewed by Janna Hill
|A word portrait with sound.
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Lovely, as are those returning swallows to Capistrano.|
|Reviewed by RWEHAVING FUN
|I could tock all night of this cozy ticking... again, such voluble verse, voluminous, vivavacious Vivian woven through each line... "in luminous light to surround"...an ending that never ends...
May you parse peace like an elusive sentence and ceaselessly conjugate its unending joy!
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
|Beautiful the interlude of love in your poem Lady Vivian.
Lovely write. Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|Enchanting poetry indeed Laura
|Reviewed by Cliff Long (Reader)
|Your new poem will become a part of the history of Southern California, to be displayed in historic monuments and libraries. Great thoughts!|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|As per usual, Vivian, you have given the reader much to contemplate, and as usual, you zero in on love and its many tributaries. Love your writing.|