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Message for a Bottle
by Vivian L Dawson
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Garlands of heart imagine
me upon the beach looming
silence of tattered and torn
from my young life scorned

Message is casting this anguish
far away with dolphins at play
just as surely as a new horizon 
of infallible mind indulgence for
antidotes of empowerment

Setting aloft the wind of this
ancestral space which caresses
my angered face poised to be
whispers of inner sanctum

F ears to face...
R esurgence to become...
E xpeditiously and
E ternally free to be

(c) Message for a Bottle
07April2012
Vivian L Dawson

 

 

 

 

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Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
There must be fifty ways to leave your lover.......or nemesis. I think your bottle came back to you. Patrick
Reviewed by Cindy Schaffer (Reader)
Beautifully Written, As You Always Do. Love, Peace, Joy, Happiness, Lots Of Laughter, And Most Of All, ~ God's Blessings, To Shower You And ALL Your Family,

Today And Everyday, ~~~~~


Cindy E. H. Schaffer :)
Reviewed by Christine Tsen
So freeing and beautifully written!
Onward, away with darkness. I identify with and admire this poem!
Blessings,
Christine
Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Garlands of heart imagine the dolphins at play.
A wonderful poem Lady Vivian.
Lady Mary Ann
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Casting away our anguish - sounds marvelous.
Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Always a dream-like situation to be the receiver of such a message and respond in kind. Beautiful sentiments expressed.
Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
If only it were that easy to cast away our troubles. I'm sure most folks like the idea of a message in a bottle, the infinite possibilities that come with the act offset by the remote chance that anyone will find the message. You have handled this theme really well, it makes a good read.
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
I have received your message from the bottle cast in a far-off shore and read it. Now, I have a clear understanding of you.

Ron
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
A fine "message" well-shared, Vivian; also I love the imagery as well as the lovely image that you have chosen to represent your theme. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis
Reviewed by John Flanagan
the poet with wings
yearning imagining moving beyond
earth boundaries
we all have to sail somewhere to
be us

an excellent poem, Vivian

john
Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Vivian,
A wonderful piece.
Budd
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Leave the wine as well in the bottle, as it will make the easiness of this poem go down smoother...
Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
I think i would like to stuff a few messages in a bottle...easier than a ship.....but, your poems message is far more interesting. enjoyed!
Reviewed by Christine Alwin
'Message for a Bottle' Just stuffing it in there is a good relief at times to take off some weight of the mind..this is deep and emotional. I can see those dolphins playing~
Reviewed by Laura Fall
An excellent poem so heartfelt and meaningful (Have A Happy Easter) Laura
Reviewed by jude forese
a message in a bottle one would hope to stumble upon and be inspired by ...
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Love this self-introspection, whether for real or made up make not one whit of difference, Vivian. It is the grit within the lines that lend hope and eventual salvation to this lonely person. You struck a good chord with me here.
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