|Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
|I like that new, to me, ideophonic use of "ouched with thorns. We need more word play like this. It is too easy to relax into the standard, easy read, approach to writing. The dreams being punctuated by pillow talk is such a pleasant image too. Good work.|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|You have a wonderful focus.|
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
|Lady Vivian ~
To lavish 'petals at a time'
Beautiful image open to the love around you. Sweetly penned.
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE
|Another gem. "...enabling growth / petals a time" ... such a delicate form of growth, so fragrant and beautiful... this is an image I will long cherish and remember ... it is one of your best lines of all-time! .... I love the optimism in your "even if it isn't yet quite what you imagined" ... Creating a Mecca indeed! Nicely done, dearest Vivian.
Radiant Smiles tread barefoot on Cool sun swept Tiles...
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|"Focus on the positive tangible aspects..."
fine, uplifting advice, Vivian, which i wish
i could follow more regularly...but i won't give
Thank you for this
|Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams
|"ouched with thorns" It got me. I am pricked. I am enchanted by the petals. Be well, Kathy|
|Reviewed by william goldman (Reader)
|GOODS STUFF,, I HAVE A LIL OF BOTH--------LOL HG|
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|First what a beautiful photo!
And yes, it is what we make of it
we can bring all to our own
positive if we desire.
Isn't it wonderful to bring such
beauty "petals at a time" ?
Love and Light
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|a wonderful write about the best possible choices for love in your own possibilities
|Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)
|another beautiful and deep piece of work today..anna|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|In other words if you can see with the one you love, love the one you're with? Besides, make your own Mecca is so much fun you might forget how much you miss him.
Thanks for the wise words in rose petals.
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|Truly a meaanigful write written so amazingly Laura|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|You have given us the ABC's of how to maintain a positive attitude whether we are having good times with that bed of roses, or more thorny situations which crop up every so often. Nice work.|