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Creating a Mecca
by Vivian L Dawson

Thursday, August 23, 2012
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Where you lay your head
real from roses comforted
by pink velvet or ouched
with thorns mired in black
tar challenged to separate
dreams with pillow talk or
tossing and turning all night
fighting evil demons

Caught between relationship
fantasies and the limitations
that you must acknowledge
day to day enforce your
foundation with passion

Focus on the positive tangible
aspects so you can remain
open to the love around you
even if it isn't yet quite what
you imagined enabling growth
petals at a time

(c) Creating a Mecca
Vivian L Dawson



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Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader) 9/4/2012
I like that new, to me, ideophonic use of "ouched with thorns. We need more word play like this. It is too easy to relax into the standard, easy read, approach to writing. The dreams being punctuated by pillow talk is such a pleasant image too. Good work.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 8/25/2012
You have a wonderful focus.
Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger 8/24/2012
Lady Vivian ~
To lavish 'petals at a time'
Beautiful image open to the love around you. Sweetly penned.

Lady Mary Ann
Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE 8/24/2012
Another gem. "...enabling growth / petals a time" ... such a delicate form of growth, so fragrant and beautiful... this is an image I will long cherish and remember ... it is one of your best lines of all-time! .... I love the optimism in your "even if it isn't yet quite what you imagined" ... Creating a Mecca indeed! Nicely done, dearest Vivian.

Radiant Smiles tread barefoot on Cool sun swept Tiles...

Reviewed by John Flanagan 8/24/2012
"Focus on the positive tangible aspects..."

fine, uplifting advice, Vivian, which i wish
i could follow more regularly...but i won't give
up trying

Thank you for this

Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams 8/23/2012
"ouched with thorns" It got me. I am pricked. I am enchanted by the petals. Be well, Kathy
Reviewed by william goldman (Reader) 8/23/2012
Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley 8/23/2012
First what a beautiful photo!
And yes, it is what we make of it
we can bring all to our own
positive if we desire.

Isn't it wonderful to bring such
beauty "petals at a time" ?


Love and Light
Reviewed by Budd Nelson 8/23/2012
a wonderful write about the best possible choices for love in your own possibilities
Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader) 8/23/2012
another beautiful and deep piece of work today..anna
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 8/23/2012
In other words if you can see with the one you love, love the one you're with? Besides, make your own Mecca is so much fun you might forget how much you miss him.

Thanks for the wise words in rose petals.

Reviewed by Laura Fall 8/23/2012
Truly a meaanigful write written so amazingly Laura
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton 8/23/2012
You have given us the ABC's of how to maintain a positive attitude whether we are having good times with that bed of roses, or more thorny situations which crop up every so often. Nice work.
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