|Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
|Vor der Kaserne,Vor dem grossen Tor,Stand eine Laterne,
Underneath the lantern, By the barrack gate,
Your theme was popular with both German and Allied soldiers during WW2. Your poem has the same poignancy as the song. I'm sure the old warriors would approve.
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Reviewed by George Dominguez
|What a beautiful full moon where a lamppost seem to be amongs the tree ready to bring the coolness of the night. Brillant and impressive of how you penned this one beautiful picture with you lovely words of poetry from the heart. THE WISE OLD OWL|
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
|"Fly me Autumn..." what a grand three words to begin this piece. Especially prominent for me are "eliminating hibernation.." and "...our place in the/Universe" (I enjoyed being reminded that we have a 'place' in the Universe) and "...full moon/directing light" reminding us that the moon reflects the sun, rounding us back to your title, "Sun of the Moon." Very satisfying. ~~ Diana|
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|Beautifully written poetry indeed Laura|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|ah walking in the moonlight ahhhh
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|VERY NICE!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|There is nothing like a moonlit walk with the one you love for the cold chill of winter breathes down your neck.
|Reviewed by Joy Hale
|Such a lovely, soft spoken tale of the wonder of autumn and your only love and you enjoying the seasons moonlight under a special lamp post for two. A dynamite picture to set the complete mood of your words spoken so eloquently.
Joy L. Hale
|Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)
|HI VIVIAN , REMINDS ME OF THE SONG THE SILVERY MOON. NOTHING LIKE WALKING WHILE A FULL MOON IS SHINING. THANKS AGAIN FOR WONDERFUL WORDS...ANNA|
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
|Lady Vivian ~
Beauty of colour, under the lamp post, unending
paths towards happiness. Spellbound in this
sweet rendering song of the season.
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|You give us much to see and contemplate, Vivian. The autumn of our thoughts are contained within the verses of this splendid poetry.
"under a lamppost meant
for us to find."
That is the ultimate guarantee, things out there that we are supposed to find. Excellent.
|Reviewed by D. Vegas
|Visions of contentment and love, Enjoyed, Vivian...
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|What a beautiful vision Vivian :)
"Framing our place in the
Universe as the sun shines"
Just an absolutely beautiful picture of two
Love and Light