|Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
|Three points of this poem, Vivian, swell out from this wonderful writing. First: "as the shadow becomes the/ faith behind our back..." how unique I find this correlary; and I immediately thought of reversing the shadow to be in front of us and we step into our destiny and faith. Second: "....junctions becoming/less cumbersome one by one" oh, what truth is that. With age comes wisdom, but as you say here, with experience so does the wisdom arrive. Third: "A journey where we were not/meant to stay..." I like that. I like this whole creation. ~~ Diana|
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|All journeys are a process of understanding our-self
Love and Light
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|A lot to ponder, but I would suffice to say that it is the process, the journey
through life that makes us who we are, and not where we end up.
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
|Lady Vivian ~
A wonderfully symphony in the journey of life ~
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Life is a journey indeed and I am on board!
|Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
|You have maintained that climbing up the staircase of life imagery right throughout the piece without it seeming too contrived. some really good phrases too. I particularly like your second verse, it really captures your theme perfectly.|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Oustanding poetry, To your journey may it be in technicolor!
Peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by william goldman (Reader)
|YOU DID IT AGAIN,!!!!!!!!!!!!! REALLY GOOD, LIKED VERY MUCH.--LOL HG|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Wonderful words and phrases...
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|"...A journey where we were not meant to stay..."
is the most truthful way of seeing it, the one
certainty. As Christine says, such a wise poem;
fine delivery, Vivian
|Reviewed by Joy Hale
|You write of wisdom and knowledge with your choice of words describing the travel through ones life. The photo speaks a thousand words of which you have chosen many pithy ones to demonstrate the journey.
Joy L. Hale
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Such a wise poem, Vivian ~|
|Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)
|THE JOURNEY IS NEVER OVER,,,THERE IS ALWAYS ANOTHER ADVENTURE...SUCH IS THE PROCESS OF LIFE. LOVELY VIVIAN KEEP UP THE WONDERFUL WORK, ANNA|
|Reviewed by D. Vegas
|We are born,grow,grow old,death...Yes the journey is long, but what a ride it is! Immensely enjoyed,Vivian!
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|the journey is never over Vivian
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|The start of this poem made me think of the title of a book I read, must be fifty years ago, with the name of "Up the Down Staircase."
Back to your poem. You, of course, are so correct in saying that . . . "they will / be measured by deeds along / the way by their portrayal / for a world without end"
Our journey is the destination. That is profound, Vivian.