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Clouding up Sunshine
by Vivian L Dawson
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~Clouding up Sunshine~

I am called the weeping willow
allow your spirits to be set free
from my stigma reaping your
heart to beat comfort and joy
for health and wellness
weeping no more tears to fill
my river from which there is
no return

(c) Clouding up Sunshine
07October2012
Vivian L Dawson

 

 

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Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Your poem continues the classical treatment of the weeping willow. I can think of three or four classical poets who have used this type of imagery. You are in good company.
Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)
soft, beautiful words...embracing the beautiful willow tree. anna
Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
This tree was used over the ages
medicinally and the first one
derived for its salicine later
manufactured into acetyl salicylic acid
known as aspirin :)

In Ireland The Pussy Willow is know as one of “the seven noble trees of the land” and was honored for its multi uses from basket weaving to thatching spars and wattles including many others.

You honor the willow in your prose

Lovely Lady Vivian

Love and Light
Lily
Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
I like the "....river from which there is no return" Neat echo note on which to leave this one. ~~ Diana
Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Marvelously melodic and softly spoken ~
Blessings, xo
Christine
Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE
Well, little miss sunshine... even on the cloudiest day, your poetry shines brightly!

Roger
Reviewed by Joy Hale
Powerful words to illustrate the moods and tempo of one who is a "weeping willow." You drew me into a vortex of understanding with your words of caring. Unusual, thought provoking and very good!

Joy L. Hale
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Weeping can be good for the soul. The last time I used a weeping willow in a poem it was very sensual.

Ron
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
A fine ode to the Weeping Willow - one of my favorite trees.
Reviewed by Budd Nelson
a beautifully painted scene Vivian
budd
Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Lady Vivian ~
Lovely weeping willow tree you are a blessing.

Lady Mary Ann
Reviewed by D. Vegas
Growing up I had a weeping willow in front of our house.
Thanks for the memory, Vivian.

Deborah
Reviewed by Debbie Lacy
Beautiful feelings and memories of the weeping willow tree Vivian. Great musing and thanks for sharing this lovely poem. Blessings!

Debbie
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Symbolic and meaningful; evocative as well, and the weeping willow is a lovely tree and symbol. Thank you, Vivian. Love and best wishes,

Regis
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
A river of no return / Filling my heart with health and wellness / If I am healthy and well, I need no tears . . . You are a wonderful weeping willow
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