Missing him blues
by Tina M Clark
Wednesday, October 26, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Imagine a banjo playing in the background a slow hillybilly type tune; For my Love.
Looking out across the pond
my love no where to be found
Gotta hear his voice soon
don't ya know
Oh I got the missing him blues
Gotta lay my lips on his neck
taste his sweet lips
feel his love surround me
Oh, I got the missing him blues
No matter the time, distance, place
My man always holds such a special place
no amount of distance can erase
oh please end these here missing him blues
Let me see his handsome face
feel his love through his heavenly embrace
reach out to hold him forever
and hear him say
yes, my love
forever and a day
Please end these here missing him blues!
I LOVE YOU HONEY
©2005 Tina Clark
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|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Awwwwww this is lovely!!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|wonderful write, tina; very nice!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Since I love both the blues and the criiters in the ponds, I find this to be a marvelous ode to your honey, Tina.|
|Reviewed by Steve Patterson
|well done. good ryhtm|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|A captivating write for all lovers.|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Paul. When Tina reads it. It prolly does sound like a song..
Can imagine it oh Susanna with a banjo on you knee..
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
This would make a great song. A few more verses and you're on your way. I love that little fly-catcher at the top. (lol)