by Tina M Clark
Monday, November 13, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Ramblings of a troubled heart.........
Writing its a tonic, a resting place, and a starting point for a long walk. Ken, talk to me and reach my heart.
When I'm at my darkest hour
When the long day
has come to its end
When in my sorrow
I can't walk away
and in my garden of pain and anger
all I sow is more
When the roads I tread
are filled with so many
twist and turns
and from tears
my eyes burn
dead ends at the end
When I wish I could
lay me down
closing my eyes
crossing my hands in death
You come and breath
teaching me how to trust again
giving me strength
to rise above
all my trials
and to once again believe
in an undying love
©2006 Tina Clark
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|Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
|A beautiful poem hardly describes this one! Awesome! Holly|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Hope filled offering Tina!!
|Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
|Walking souls...rest, in listening, whispers heard among the twists and turns in life, to straighten are trod through undying Love...
You got me going , "When I..."
You have a Beautiful Soul~ Nice to meet you! :)
Love and Peace~
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Awesome power of love that knows no boundaries of heaven and earth, but only that it is there to forever draw on as long as we remember not to forget.
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Writing its a tonic, a resting place, and a starting point for a long walk
It truly is, if we let it, Tina. Write On.
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Great hope expounded in this lovely poem.|
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|FAITH! Will Show you the WAy! HOPE and LoVE will KEEP YOU there ! Enjoy! Ken and your Love! POWerful WRite from HEART and from the START! ONE STep at a time... baby steps if need be- YOU will reach his HEART Physically! Emotionally you're there and I'm so HAPPY for you! YOU deserve to have LOVE and ONE another! NOW! Go get em'! My friend~
Love, Peace and Warm HuGs, Sheeexoox
I see your going through some tough emotions, but if you want some smiles, come over to my side of the den for awhile!....Some have been serious too, but I've been silly lately! Miss you! YOu're in my heart and I send you WArm Blessings of Wisdom and Strength!
|Reviewed by Steve Ralph
|Tina this is a truely beautiful poem filled with love and emotion,
and I can empiphise with it totaly.
before meeting my new wife, i was in the same state of mind, just wanting to close my eyes for the last time, knowing there was someone special for everyone, but not seeming to be able to find them,
but when she came along the world became a beautiful place again, and I became the latest member of what I now call the "I KNEW YOU WERE OUT THERE CLUB",
Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Just like me. I can relate, Tina. It's great that you have someone like this. Love and peace,