|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|You do not settle for anything less
but the perfect fit who is the best
you know he stands above all the rest
simply because with you he is blessed
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I'm with you on your "desired attributes," Joy. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|THESE ARE THINGS ONE HAS TO BE WILLING TO WAIT TO FIND IN THAT SPECIAL GUY... AND WHENEVER YOU GET THE TIME, MY FRIEND, I WOULD LIKE TO KNOW HOW YOUR 'SEARCH' TURNED OUT. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by D. Vaineo
|Joy, Very well done with results yet.
|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
|Love this one Joy my friend really needs to read this one I think!!! If you dont mind ill have to show it to her sometime!!!
In Christs Love
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|No doubt your paths will cross|
|Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)
|JOY, WRITTEN STRAIGHT FROM THE HEART..WHEN WE WAIT LONG ENOUGH OUR DREAMS BECOME A REALITY. KEEP GOING MY DEAR FRIEND, ANNA|
|Reviewed by Richard King
|Nicely done Joy, First question. So how did it work out?
Second question. 28 years later, any changes to the list?
I like digging back through some of my earlier stuff. This looks like it was a fun journey.
|Reviewed by George Dominguez
|Hi Joy! Wonderful poem. Desire to fire WOW! Very well written. THE WISE OLD OWL LOVES this.|
|Reviewed by Phillip William Allen
|Great words of desire.|
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Lovely writing indeed sweet lady...Hugsss|
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Loved this! Wonderful lyrical lilt to your poem, Joy! Great job!
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|May your list be completed.|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|Hope springs eternal, Joy,
and i never deny its virtues
...nor do you in this uplifting poem;
you've set the bar high but why not
strive for quality and real commitment?
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Awwww, how sweet and romantic...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|And Kind and Gentle he will be,
for Lady Joy could attract No other!
So full of charm and grace...herself.
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|What a beautiful sweet piece of poetry!
Yes, that is the ultimate list :)
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|"I look for you everywhere"
Except singles parties and the bar scene.
"He must be kind,
Gentle and true
A man of faith"
All this kinda narrows down the search, but worth it if you find what you desire. Of course these men who come off as kind and gentle and true, sometimes changes after they say I do.
Good luck, I hope he is out there for you.
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|Lovely writing indeed Laura
|Reviewed by James Johnston
|Oh woe is me
For things I don't see
Had I found you first
Would have saved your thirst
Would have shortened your list
Had I not have missed
This gift of life
Just to make you my wife
Joy, this is tongue-in-cheek so please don't be upset! I enjoyed "The List" as I enjoy all your works. Just keep me your friend on FaceBook and in real life.