|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Joy, You managed to express the pain of loss and betrayal...that is difficult for anyone to do unless you can see the pain in their eyes and feel it in your heart. You managed to do it with ease and conviction.
|Reviewed by Donna Lynch
|Love "Autumn Love" -Hope your friend has recovered.|
|Reviewed by George Dominguez
|Very imaginative Joy from Autumn to a bust of Sprigtime. Very well penned. Good choice of words in your description. God Bless. George AKA THE WISE OLD OWL|
|Reviewed by Barbara Henry
|Sad, but a beautifully written poem;it is my hope that your friend has found the motivation to face forward toward many more promising springs and summers.
Barbara J Henry
|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
|Well written, thank you for sharing
In Christs Love
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|Wonderfully written and full of emotion.
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
|The love and heartache are palpable, the story is so sad and will break any heart that loves. Written with emotion. ~Hugs, Elizabeth|
|Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)
|WOW, JOY,,,WONDERFUL WRITE. A PAINFUL SITUATION...MAKES THE HEART GROW WISER. ANNA|
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Such pain is not easily expressed in poetic lines,
but you succeeded with great skill and understanding.
Your friend should love this poem, Joy. I know that
I do. -gene.
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Aw! So sad....and it happens way tooooo often! I do hope your friend's heart mends fast! If there's no trust....there's nothing!
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|A Touching write indeed Laura
|Reviewed by James Johnston
|Vividly poignant (do I overuse this word?) In my mind I am reminded of the words of Lord Tennyson."I hold it true, whate'er befall;
I feel it, when I sorrow most;
'Tis better to have loved and lost
Than never to have loved at all." Tissue, please.....Jim
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Wow, what a blend of dark and light as her love guided her down and then back to herself. I am sure you were a wonderful friend to cry to, through all the pain.
|Reviewed by George MacLean Akurunwa
|Seasons hold great mysteries. Very touching. Thanks.|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Powerfully sad, indeed.|
|Reviewed by Richard King
|Joy, It's a lovely piece, but you treated him way to nicely..... You and I are usually on the same page, but I'd have had to carve him up a little bit,,,,, of course, just for the sake of my friend, but never the less we'd have sliced his ass up.....!!!!
Great write though... Thanks Dick
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Oh my I feel so much pain within these lines sweet lady..I certainly hope you are ok my sweet friend...sighhh...stay safe and well...Hugss|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Icily offers the taste of heartache and loss....
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|There is pain here, Joy,
which you try to come to terms with
in an elegant write.
|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|THIS WORK HAS A ESSENCE OF SADNESS BUT OF HOPE ALSO. THANK GOD FOR CHANGE OF SEASONS. FOR EVEN IF SPRING TIME STILL HOLDS WINTERS CHILL...THERE IS SUMMER'S SUN TO LOOK FORWARD DO, WHICH, IF ONE LETS IT, WILL MELT THAT FROST WHICH BEGAN IN AUTUMN. A WONDERFUL SHARING...ENJOYED. THANKS. LOVE, BLESSINGS * FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Seasons come and go
but love remains to grow
You captured the sadness
now to embrace the gladness
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|You captured the seasons of love in a wonderful poetic fashion that shows how deceit tears one apart.|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|The mischief that falsely professed love can bring is sad and very hurtful. There are those who use love as a weapon to subjugate and control another human being. The results of these sad stories range from emotional upheaval to suicide and often murder. Playing insincerely with love is an ugly, ugly game. This was a very good poem on the subject of manipulation.|