|Reviewed by J Howard
|Definately a truth. writing the truth is much more difficult then it looks. Well done
|Reviewed by Ida Streeter
|Use to think it was just a song,but love truly IS better the second time around. We both know that.
The poem is so sweet, written by a truely sweet girl.Keep writing Honey.
|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|WOW!...THIS WORK REMINDS ME OF THAT TIMELESS CLASSIC SONG SUNG BY DINAH WASHINGTON, ENTITLED; 'WHAT A DIFFERENCE A DAY MAKES'. PLEASE GO ON LINE AND LISTEN TO IT AND I AM SURE YOU WILL UNDERSTAND WHAT I MEAN. GOD BLESS YOU AND YOURS AND THANKS SO MUCH FOR SHARING. LOVE & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
|This is awesome thank you for sharing
In Christs Love
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Glad to see that 5:00 PM has a bright new ring to it.
Like the form, like the words, like the poem, Joy.
|Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)
|lovely write joy...5pm home life things to do,,,and wonderful things to sharre. keep going my friend, anna|
|Reviewed by George Dominguez
|5PM and a new life begins. Thats sounds about right. Whenever your husband gets home life starts over for you every day. Wonderful poem Joy. God Bless. George AKA THE WISE OLD OWL|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Great outlook on the new situation; I can completely relate to this, Joy. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes to you,
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Excellent emotions in this expression.|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|When old time has new meaning, Joy,
the world turns fresh and loving.
A delight of a poem.
|Reviewed by pat medlin
|this just paints a smile....so nice to read|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
|Wow. What a pick me up for starting a new life. Such hope and excitement. Love it. Liz|
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
How precious this..with so many divorces going on. I hope your love with this new man will stay in both your hearts forever.
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Nothing like new beginnings, Joy! I truly felt connected to this one! Well done....
|Reviewed by George MacLean Akurunwa
|Well written. Thanks.|
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Yes its a beautiful feeling ... sighhh...Breathtaking sweet lady...Hugsss|
|Reviewed by Paul Judges
|Excellent piece, Joy|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|New beginnings are often truly wonderful.|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|It's so nice to have a man around the house. Good luck|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner
It does make a difference coming home to an empty place, as such a place is internal.
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
This is a
|Reviewed by Richard King
|and as the song says..... "It's five o'clock somewhere." Nicely done Joy. Thanks Dick|
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|Words spoken wonderfully indeed an excellent write Laura
|Reviewed by James Johnston
|A delightful reminder or peaceful existence. So glad you are still reliving 5:00 PM with him. Jim|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|This radiates bliss!
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Hey! Hey! Hey! I love it. Happy for you.|