|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|It is akin to a fairytale when romance finds its way by chance...too many missed opportunities pass us by and we often are left later in our lives to wonder...what if? Now off to pt 2 to find what destiny has in store for this couple.|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|It's wonderful when destiny hands us such a priceless surprise. So real and conversational, loved it.|
|Reviewed by Clarence Prince
|Don't you forget this, Joy! There maybe some catching up to do, especially after coffee. Well done!|
|Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)
|JOY, LOVE THIS INTRO...AND AM PART TWO WILL BE EVEN BETTER. GOOD WORK AS ALWAYS, ANNA|
|Reviewed by George Dominguez
|Sounds romantic already. Got to read the 2nd half to find out the ending. Very well written Joy. It builds up to a where you just got to read the next part. Keeps you interested for more. God Bless George AKA THE WISE OLD OWL|
|Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
|Great start. I am certainly one that is well into "chance meetings."
"I won't stay long, I promise!" Ha, words said so many times by so many men... Okay, on to part two.
|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|THERE IS NO WAY THAT I AM GOING TO MISS PART TWO(SMILE). GOD BLESS YOU JOY. I WISH YOU LOVE, 'WISDOM' & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
|Awesome thank you for sharing this one with us
In Christs Love
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|A wonderful experience well-shared through your verses, Joy. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|Wonderfully written indeed a sweet and romantic poem Laura
|Reviewed by John Domino
|Well? How about tea? Nice way to get things stirred up Joy. Let the imagination flow. Well done indeed.
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Captivating and charming!
I'm hoping for a fairytale ending :)
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|i'll be looking for part two. ~ Morgan|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|....a couple I just got to know shared a story similar to this..it is fate indeed :) (btw they are now happily married)|
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Compelling with Intrigue
for the dilema that this poem
presents from your very expansive
imagination...wanting more of this
mystery solved...what will you write?
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|If this truly did happen....sounds like the beginning of something wonderful....
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Hope this happened for real, because it sounds wonderful.|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Wonderful opening to a new chapter that promises romance unrestrained.
|Reviewed by Paul Judges
|Nicely done, Joy ! Serendipity...|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|Off to a wonderful start, Joy,
'the magic hand of chance'
i love this and am looking forward to more.
|Reviewed by James Johnston
Joy,A cliffhanger! Now I won't sleep a wink until Part 2. "Marriage loomed only as an outgrowth of happenstance; you met a person" and what will be the outcome? In frenzied anticipation, Just Jim