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Oh, Doctor, What Beautiful Brown Eyes You Have. Continuation
by Joy L. Hale

Sunday, September 18, 2011
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Romance is in the air as Mark and Vanessa meet for their first date.


Eagerly anticipating her date with Dr. Mark Reynolds
Vanessa chose her wardrobe with careful thought
She selected a dress in seafoam silk that accentuated
Her green eyes and made her body feel silken and sensuous

Arriving at the restaurant, her eyes scanned the room
As she did, she saw Mark immediately, feeling her heart
Flutter with butterflies as she moved slowly towards him
She somehow knew that this night would be like no other
She had ever experienced.

Standing to greet her, he placed a gentle kiss on her cheek
A simple enough gesture that nevertheless flooded her body
With a liquid warmth that took her breath away. "what is there
about this man that turns me to molten lava when I see him"?

Casually, but elegantly attired, Mark wore a jacket of
Brown and camel tweed, an Italian silk shirt in tone
On tone ecru,  gently pleated trousers and golden brown
Shoes to compliment the entire look. How utterly handsome
This man is and his eyes are like melted choclate. Merciful
Heavens, be still my wildly beating heart!

After a delicious dinner of fresh Mahi- Mahi, Mark asked her
If she would enjoy going to his private club for dancing and
After dinner drinks. She nodded yes, only imagining what she
Would feel when he took her in his arms.

The club was beautiful and the ambience rich in atmosphere.
They chose to dance outside amongst the dazzling stars and
The bright, full moon shining in all of it's romantic glory.
When Mark took her into his arms, they both emitted a lingering
Sigh, telling each other, without words, how they both felt.

Mark trembled and was embarrased at how easily his feelings
Betrayed him. When the music stopped, Vanessa touched her mid section  as if to calm the erratic movements of her traitorous stomach.

Moving closer to one another, Mark sought out her soft lips. Gentle at First, his mouth played over hers with an increasing firmness. Her lips
Were addictive and he couldn't get enough of her  sweetness. Vanessa was a sensuous woman and met his passion kiss for kiss.

Mark, still trembling, found that he needed to move away from Vanessa For a few minutes or he would embarass them both. As he raked his Hands through his hair, he let out a sigh of frustration. Knowing that he Would need to explain his actions, he said "I need to collect myself; I Feel as if my world has just exploded into millions of small shards.

Not even understanding his own feelings, Mark uttered in an almost
Exasperated tone, "Vanessa, are you involved with anyone right now?
With a slow, mischevious smile, she asked Mark why he was asking.
"Because, you little temptress, I want you to be available to see no
Other man but me, I am falling for you fast and hard. Can I hope to wish
That you feel the same about me?"

Vanessa came closer to him as he groaned with the nearness
Of her luscious body. She took her hands and cupped them lovingly
Around his face, her voice hoarse as she said, "How about buying us A cool drink, so we can talk about what is happening to both of us? 

Copyright September 18th, 2011
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Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader) 9/4/2012
Reviewed by John Domino 5/26/2012
Look for the continuation of "Oh, Doctor." I am still looking...


Reviewed by jude forese 10/22/2011
enjoyed reading all three of your "Oh, Doctor .." series ...
Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen 10/6/2011
the chemistry of it all is so overwhelming!
well done, joy!
Reviewed by JMS Bell 9/24/2011
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 9/22/2011
I don't think they need to talk more but the cool drink could come in handy right now.LOL. Great write Joy.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 9/20/2011
And the initial sparks are exploding all around them...kool story unfolding,Joy...right from the very first segment...looking forward to much more...........

Reviewed by Richard King 9/19/2011
So good to see you here again Joy. Hope you're feeling better. Welcome back, I'll be watching for the follow up to this one. Dick
Reviewed by Donna Chandler 9/19/2011
I can see this is developing into a beautiful well written love story with happiness and joy aplenty.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray 9/18/2011
Welcome back, Joy; and thank you for sharing this continuing romantic tale. Love and best wishes,

Reviewed by John Flanagan 9/18/2011
You're back, Joy, and how!
Splendid detail underscoring the meeting,
the feelings, the wants and the sheer romance
and sensuality.

Reviewed by James Johnston 9/18/2011
Dear (Returned) Joy. How grand to have you back! I thought the following was sensual writing ("In bed this morning you tucked into the cove of my belly, our feet slipping past each other like fish. I reached out to embrace the flat rock of your back and carved out our names with my tongue. ~ T. Blagg") Sweet Joy, You put him in the shade! Welcome back!
Reviewed by Vivian Dawson 9/18/2011
A SOOOOOO Very WELcome Back!!!!!!!!!
And with so much Tender Romance.....
~Lady Joy~ Thank You,
your love and passion for life is showing!!!!!!!

Lady Vivian
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 9/18/2011
This is wonderfully sensual and full of energy!
And I'm hoping you are feeling better, so glad to read your writing again!
Reviewed by Mark Lichterman 9/18/2011
Well this is looking to be very enjoyable and exactly what Vanessa wishes for, so no we'll have to wait to see if it ends the way she wishes. As for Mark, well, it looks like he,also, may get what he wants.

Looking good, Joy

Reviewed by Felix Perry 9/18/2011
Nicely done Joy, like the old romantics you capture the spirit of igniting love at its onset...and make the reader feel the sheer excitement of the moment.
Reviewed by Laura Fall 9/18/2011
A wonderfully written story indeed Laura
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 9/18/2011
That's what I would call a fast and furious whirlwind, Katie-bar-the-door-the-animals-are-loose kinda romancing. I can only imagine what was in store for these two lovers later on.
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 9/18/2011
I was so excited when I saw the title..this is plush and can't wait for the next segment!

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