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They wrote it all down
by Denise Edwards
Thursday, February 17, 2011
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Old Man River’s laughing at me
making fun of my misery

I didn’t know the calamity
That losing you would bring me

The Moon said I’d be lonely
Without you, my one and only

The Stars said I’d cry a river too
And fill the lake with tears of blue

But I said, hey, what do they know?
But I knew when I watched you go

Now I taste my own tears of misery
Knowing what a fool I am to set you free

But without you I’m really not free
But a prisoner by my own perfidy

They wrote it all down, what I’ve done
Somewhere between clouds and sun

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Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 2/19/2011
Excellent writing my sweet friend....please stay safe and always be you sweet lady...Hugss..remember you are always in my thoughts and my prayers.....ALWAYS
Chanti Lace

Reviewed by Felix Perry 2/18/2011
Brilliant piece of art with the perfect capture of the picture or perhaps the picture captures so well the words.
Reviewed by YADUVANSHI NEHA 2/18/2011
well expressed feelings and desires...
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 2/17/2011
This is yet another of your moving and meaningful writes that expresses feelings with which I can relate, Denise. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 2/17/2011
A different kind of pinning for a lost lover, and one that I like for its difference. This showed talent behind the words.
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 2/17/2011
and what you have written down
is deeply expressionate
our choices are never as certain
as we sometimes think they will be

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