by Denise Edwards
Tuesday, March 08, 2011
Rated "G" by the Author.
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How love, doth thy keep thy heart from death
when love’s tender breath of life doth flee it?
what belief hath thou left to be beholden?
liken this perfidious soul to smoldering ash!
Burnt embers doused of fire by frigid tears
surely one’s cries shalt echo atop mountains
who’s thunderous laud is cause for trembling
for thy kiss and tender caress, grieveth me!
Struggle I, just to breathe of such knowledge
of thy haunting voice piercing night’s silence
memories of thy kiss leaveth no solace,
nor comfort, memories giveth unto me
For dreams which fall as scattered tears
are remnants gleaned I of you, evermore
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|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Deep, moving, internally enchanting....
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Breath taking sweet lady ...just like you sighhh....Hugssssss|
|Reviewed by D. Vegas
|Denise, " Shattered dreams," losing a loved
one and going through the grief...
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Truly captivating almost Shakespearean in feel...enjoyed.
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
I love reading Shakespeare, and you have made his language come alive in this most tender and thought provoking poem. It's filled with emotion and pain but done eloquently.
Peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Classic, beautiful and deeply emotive Denise.|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Soul-grasping in meaning and emotive strength, Denise. Thank you for sharing. I can relate. Love and best wishes,