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Eternal Lover
by Vesna * Blueflame
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Love asks for naught yet giveth all..

Has he awoken
to a new dream
effacing the old
creating a new theme

Has he opened his mind
allowing new thoughts to find
One burning in his heart
or is it gone never to spark
a Love that has been lost
and from his heart washed

My Love
yearning has pierced my soul
longing for that ultimate goal
yet once that in love did shine
has withdrawn its wings in dreams divine

Though you be asleep within my loins
a burning cold transmutes the coins
that have been given as payment for love
issued in love covered with blood

Now all that is left are memories bright
of One that embraced my shimmering light
yet though he be gone in search of another

I love him still

My Eternal Lover
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Reviewed by Regis Auffray 12/4/2004
I don't think the flame of love can ever be extinguished. A most sensitively refined write, Vesna. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader) 12/3/2004
A Very Beautifully expressed poem of a broken heart like I feel for one. Truly Beautiful. Thank You.
God Bless you and your family
warm and happy holidays and all days
Reviewed by Sage Writer (Reader) 12/2/2004
The flame burns felt by many. It does get better but not forgotten. This is a magnificent, expressive writing.
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 12/2/2004
... My goodness, you cover a lot of emotional ground in this poem, Vesna. Such soulful mourning and yet bitter-sweetness, too. With feelings that run this deep, I think you conjure the sense of a continuing hope - that love will ultimately have its irrepressible way! Such controlled passion here. And I love the faithfulness to love, as well. I loved the comment you left on my last page, Vesna - thank you so much! Impish I am, I guess - it's the humorist in me! But you, likewise, have a yearning and giving soul that has much hunger yet for all the joys - and, maybe, even sorrows - that life has to share! I celebrate you as a fellow-partner in the musical dance of the rhythm of life! TY Kate xx
Reviewed by jude forese 12/2/2004
beatiful,eloquent poem! a romantic gem ...
Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) 12/1/2004
Well expressed love emotions. He hasn't gone anywhere, Vesna. You are a women with exceptional heart full of love and passion.
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 12/1/2004
Hot Romantic You!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 12/1/2004
This kind of love is truly eternal, such a beautiful and sad poem Vesna.
Reviewed by Phillip William Allen 12/1/2004
Love has a nasty way of branding us with thoughts that carry with us for ever
Reviewed by Lori Moore 12/1/2004
Very nice.
Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader) 12/1/2004
very sweet Ves, I liked that coin line too, like much, :) Al
Reviewed by A PAX 12/1/2004

Though you be asleep within my loins
a burning cold transmutes the coins
that have been given as payment for love
issued in love covered with blood
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 12/1/2004
Beautiful Vesna!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain 12/1/2004

Verse, rhythm, style, meaning - exceptional!! Loved this one!!

Best wishes,

Reviewed by Sue Hess 12/1/2004
i like this...the form and rhyme are excellent
Reviewed by E T Waldron 12/1/2004
Vesna this shouts the authors character, honor, loyalty, beauty a gift to all who read and learn what true courage is. Your
love is returned by the one that counts most!
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