|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|Wonderfully expressed, Vesna! It is extremely rare that one finds a love that bestows such blissful joy. Although, time and he have moved on, nothing can take away the joy that was once given, nor hopefully, its memory and appreciation. Excellent and expressive write! Bravo!|
|Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez
Beautiful Romance expressed like a master.
wonders of love espressed here are great and really enjoyed this.
True Love ,as is obvious you possess is a precious gift.
Please hold close to your heart and shield it as Holy words
Rich Criso Suarez
|Reviewed by Barbara Terry
|So romantic and yet so sad Vesna. My love like in this poem remains for my mother and my sisters, but in reality my mother hated me and abandoned me, and my sisters have abandoned me too with hatred and scorn. Even tho I tell them "don't leave me now with an empty hand
in a world cold and bland" I know they will never listen to my plea. Thnx for sharing sis. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, stubborn to a fault, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your sad little sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I may as well be."
|Reviewed by Duke LaRance
Wow! Amazing in all respects. Absolutely gorgeous weaving of language -- Duke
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Beautifully done, Vesna. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and peace to you.
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Ah Vesna, this is so very lovely, absolutely beautiful!
|Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Such a deep and meaningful write. I found myself relating to so much said in it. So well written. Brava!
|Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger
|Vesna, very often, it seems as if in ones lifetime, one can easily be reminded of the ageless phrase, “does life imitate art” or is it, “does art imitate life?” This strikingly well-crafted, poignant piece, is one such climatic composition when for this reader, definitely searched through the hidden corridors seeking gainful passage in a conscious effort to bask within the beautiful wonders that are held inside the golden grail of love and life. Unfortunately many have often searched in absolute futility, my gifted friend. However, there are those who are, or have been extremely fortunate enough to have it within their yearning grasp, and then suddenly, without any rational reason, find it has vanished, ends up leaving a long lasting void, which some never fully recover from. Someone once told me that it’s better to have loved and lose it, rather to never have been loved at all. I enjoyed the read, and I thank you for sharing your work. Take good care and be well.|
|Reviewed by Henry Lefevre
|We are all chasing something -- but what? Few of us know.
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|Always Romantic You...
Your Friend, TRASK
|Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations
|Yes, my dear friend... these moments are the essence of life, and we would be ungrateful if we didn't imbibe each one of them fully, reverently, as clear droplets from the source that surges... eternity. And then, more droplets will come. The source is wise and just. A poignant poem, indeed, but one full of faith and beauty.
Endless blessings of
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|These "moments" are the real stuff
that Life is made of.
A beautiful poem Vesna.
Many Blessings of Love & Light,
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|breath taking write!|
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|love's torment eternal... heartfelt, well done!|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Yes as Jerry said this is oh so poignant, and oh so wistful, but oh so beautiful as well. That type of love is so rare and some of us only find it once in a lifetime others not at all.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|So very well written...in fine style...yip and I think Jerry said it well!!
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Sounds to me like you have a little unfinished business concerning this countinent-jumping lover. All I can say is that you made your point very vividly and very poignantly.|