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Brief Moment in Time
by Vesna * Blueflame
Saturday, August 06, 2005
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How quickly it passed
as love we grasped
Our  hearts in life
and in a brief moment enshrined
our eternal light
glowing in darkness of night
 The joy 
in its pristine quilt
its  ecstasy transmuting guilt
Though we parted
and to other horizons flew
I'll remember our time
vividly ..and glory anew
You and I tasted heaven
within our shimmering hearts
without warning you faded away
imploding in blazing parts
Could't we have stayed a moment longer
embraced in each others' thoughts
resting in one another's arms
and eternal cosmic courts
Can't we do this again
can't I hear you just once more
before you fly to that distant shore
don't leave me now with an empty hand
in a world cold and bland
save a smile for me my One
and kiss eternal ....
for I will find those lips
even if I venture through
planes infernal

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Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson 9/18/2005
Wonderfully expressed, Vesna! It is extremely rare that one finds a love that bestows such blissful joy. Although, time and he have moved on, nothing can take away the joy that was once given, nor hopefully, its memory and appreciation. Excellent and expressive write! Bravo!
Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez 8/19/2005

Beautiful Romance expressed like a master.
wonders of love espressed here are great and really enjoyed this.
True Love ,as is obvious you possess is a precious gift.
Please hold close to your heart and shield it as Holy words
Rich Criso Suarez
Reviewed by Barbara Terry 8/19/2005
So romantic and yet so sad Vesna. My love like in this poem remains for my mother and my sisters, but in reality my mother hated me and abandoned me, and my sisters have abandoned me too with hatred and scorn. Even tho I tell them "don't leave me now with an empty hand
in a world cold and bland" I know they will never listen to my plea. Thnx for sharing sis. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, stubborn to a fault, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your sad little sister, Barbie

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I may as well be."

Reviewed by Duke LaRance 8/16/2005

Wow! Amazing in all respects. Absolutely gorgeous weaving of language -- Duke
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 8/16/2005
Beautifully done, Vesna. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and peace to you.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 8/15/2005
Ah Vesna, this is so very lovely, absolutely beautiful!

Reviewed by Chanti Niven 8/14/2005
Dear Vesna,
Such a deep and meaningful write. I found myself relating to so much said in it. So well written. Brava!
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger 8/11/2005
Vesna, very often, it seems as if in ones lifetime, one can easily be reminded of the ageless phrase, “does life imitate art” or is it, “does art imitate life?” This strikingly well-crafted, poignant piece, is one such climatic composition when for this reader, definitely searched through the hidden corridors seeking gainful passage in a conscious effort to bask within the beautiful wonders that are held inside the golden grail of love and life. Unfortunately many have often searched in absolute futility, my gifted friend. However, there are those who are, or have been extremely fortunate enough to have it within their yearning grasp, and then suddenly, without any rational reason, find it has vanished, ends up leaving a long lasting void, which some never fully recover from. Someone once told me that it’s better to have loved and lose it, rather to never have been loved at all. I enjoyed the read, and I thank you for sharing your work. Take good care and be well.
Reviewed by Henry Lefevre 8/10/2005
We are all chasing something -- but what? Few of us know.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 8/9/2005
Always Romantic You...

Your Friend, TRASK
Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations 8/9/2005
Yes, my dear friend... these moments are the essence of life, and we would be ungrateful if we didn't imbibe each one of them fully, reverently, as clear droplets from the source that surges... eternity. And then, more droplets will come. The source is wise and just. A poignant poem, indeed, but one full of faith and beauty.
Endless blessings of
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® 8/9/2005
These "moments" are the real stuff
that Life is made of.

A beautiful poem Vesna.

Many Blessings of Love & Light,
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 8/8/2005
breath taking write!
Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen 8/7/2005
love's torment eternal... heartfelt, well done!
Reviewed by Felix Perry 8/6/2005
Yes as Jerry said this is oh so poignant, and oh so wistful, but oh so beautiful as well. That type of love is so rare and some of us only find it once in a lifetime others not at all.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 8/6/2005
So very well fine style...yip and I think Jerry said it well!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 8/6/2005
Sounds to me like you have a little unfinished business concerning this countinent-jumping lover. All I can say is that you made your point very vividly and very poignantly.
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