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A Destiny?
by Vesna * Vanessa
Saturday, November 25, 2006
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Cold guardians of the material world tend to diminsh the cry of the soul..

I..a destiny
unceratin in my dreams
meandering within sharp walls
of false security
it seems

These cold guardians
of my existence escape
carving me into formless shape

I cry
I shall die
before I allow
the Me
to be
lost in life's ambiguity
as I turn
and see
my life
a vista of earthiness
and spirituality
evolving... here upon this Earth  
in a parody of scenes
giving birth to imagenings new
ever exposed
to nuances and hues
through events I choose

at times an  Angel in flight
reflecting ..
a spirit of delight

and then shadow crying

almost dying

My soul a stargate
left ajar
beckoning from afar
a path of life
a destiny
certain of my role

being one with you

an eternal goal 


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Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson 4/3/2009
Vesna! This is so emotionally moving, and wonderfully beautiful! I'm glad I didn't miss it. Into my library it goes! Thanks.
Reviewed by Jackson Aniefiok 2/5/2009
destiny is one word that is so much attached to my life. nice poem, we need some more
Reviewed by Larry Matthews 11/1/2008
excellant,great,inspired. I loved it. Luke
Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER 8/12/2008
You are a most precious soul poet, your imagery is incredibly soul enriching, wise, and beautiful, otherwise words fail me!
Love and Blessings! Jasmin Horst
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 1/14/2008
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!! I love it!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling 12/18/2006
Beautiful write my friend, the words in this are very thought provoking that are uplifting and inspiring reminding the reader that they can conquer, they can win, they can make it! Loved it!
Blessings and Merry Christmas,
Joyce Bowling
Reviewed by Miss Pandora 12/6/2006
Vesna, so good to be back and reading you again, I love the uplifting positivity in girded my spirit. Love to you, Panda :)
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 12/5/2006
Loved the way you did this one! Enjoyed the feelings it give me :-)
Reviewed by K. Mulroney 12/2/2006
Very good! This piece had a flow of nature vs. human fraility.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price 11/30/2006
Beautiful. I was captivated by the imagery and meaning. Liz
Reviewed by Morning Star 11/30/2006
Excellent poetic view of thoughts
great imagery and excellent choice of words
And flow, I love the view of your spiritual
Reflections on this write!
Love And Peace To You..Morning Star
Reviewed by Randall Barfield 11/26/2006
really interesting...being one with superb. Thanks for sharing
Reviewed by Handsum Hart 11/26/2006
Lovely penning, with a lovely finish

Best wishes
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson 11/26/2006
emerging with light
and which roads to travel....enjoyed the feelings here
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 11/26/2006
Compelling write!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 11/25/2006
This is deeply compelling, Vesna; like a cry that will be heard and will not be denied. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Reviewed by richard cederberg 11/25/2006
Vesna ...

A clarion cry of the heart here. Your third stanza, starting with exhausted, flows powerfully when spoken aloud. Well done!

Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Reviewed by J M 11/25/2006
My soul is startgate left ajar.............. souful expressions dear Vesna.

Love -Peace,
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader) 11/25/2006
Great fantasy and imagination in this poem. Victor
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 11/25/2006
Reviewed by Peter Paton 11/25/2006

The eternal cry of the genie is " Your wish is my command "..
Make your own dreams come true..
Superlative write from your golden quill


Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) 11/25/2006
Most interesting! Enjoyed the depths of this poem. God Bless, Holly
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