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Destiny untold
by Vesna * Vanessa
Saturday, January 27, 2007
Rated "G" by the Author.
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I feel no more my heart is frozen
as sorrow deep tears me from sleep
gone is the gladness. which once was chosen
for once again my soul does weep

In slumber sorrow assails the goal
will love ever manifest within my soul
for bitter is the bane of a destiny untold

Visions of past mergings take shape
as in silence my thoughts escape
to fields of everlasting bliss

Is this my Soul's wish?

I know not wisdom.. it eludes me

I often ponder the dread of this dream
to know  battles in which I scream
crying out in a billowing voice
growling in pain for I have no choice

Gladly I will give to illusion's embrace
for heaviness does my heart encase 
for  love in all its splendour
has long since given to surrender
and  nights simmering a past scene
dissipate as if they never had been
as ashen storms permeate my dream

This raging hail and wrath  assails
a burning heart in which defeat prevails
soon this carbon structure in plight
will wither and be empty of life
but its essence will flee in rapturous glee
away from this earth..then to see 
only light peace

 and a love free


Is this my Soul's wish?



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Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Beautifil!!!!!!!!!! Very nice!!!!!!!!! I love it!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
A deeply meaningful and soulful write, Vesna. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,

Reviewed by J M
Truth is always spoken from deep with the soul.
This is beautiful and soulful

Light & peace,
Reviewed by A PAX
Straight from the heat, you have rebirthed yourself Vesna
like the phoenix
pax A
Reviewed by Debra Harmes-Kurth
My first thoughts while reading this piece is the honesty of it. The feelings of confusion and passion come through very clear. The second thought was how very easy it is to read, the flow from line to line is smooth and thus so creates a beauiful sound. By the way I love the painting, lovely~!
Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines
Ah, nightmare of mortal illusions, but the promise of spiritual reality. Gorgeous poem, Vesna! If this is typical Croatian verse, I may have to move there!

Write on!
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
Vesna this is classic poetry, touching the senses, the emotions and imagination.
Reviewed by H. Lena Jones
Vesna, I would say the Soul's wish would be for a love that's true; a love that knows no pain or disappointment. I hear the cry of a voice longing to find that forever love...and find it it will when sought for in the right place.
Great writing!

Much love and happiness
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Vesna though your destiny may be untold, your poetry is a triumph for which you are to be applauded!Thank you for this splendid keeper!;-) ET
Reviewed by Approximately Naive
Mount up and ascend on the wide wingspans of love and freedom - what a blissful release - indeed what a blissful thought.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Most beautiful poetry Vesna!!

love tinka
Reviewed by Bruce Nickerson
Dear Vesna,

What beautiful prose. I know the emotion. I am there also. The joy of life is antithetical to sorrow realized. I have been away so, so, long. I am occupied with domestic political necessity. Our nation is simmering with fascist threats.

A dark period is upon us, if patriots are not compelled with onus.

Please pray for our people.

Very truly yours,

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Wow, after reading how fantastic this write is I wonder how I can even dare call myself a poet. Your skill, passion and imagery is more then I can absorb in one reading. I will save this and savor it again and again. Well done dear freind.

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Beautiful write, a write that is full of honesty, passion, and true feelings. A warm and wonderful write...enjoyed.
Joyce Bowling
Reviewed by Michael Mathieu
Well done, excellent write,
Reviewed by Linda Hill
Excellent write Twin Flame.
As Richard says...this is a classic!!!

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Beautiful Vesna!
May we welcome the Great Unknown ... the Promotion/Graduation from this life ... Beautiful people like yourself have seen and lived through far too much! My admiration and heart to You!
Love, Suzie :-D
Reviewed by richard cederberg
I would have to take my hat off and bow to you for the sublimity and honesty of this write Vesna. It is classic in all senses. You might not know wisdom, but wisdom knows you, and in this write your pen was imbued with it. Brava!

Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Reviewed by Joyce Devenish
Excellent write. I enjoyed reading your work. Best wishes JM
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Yes, I know these feelings!
And we DO wonder, every single time, it seems...if this is really
our 'Soul's wish.'
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