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Longing for Love's Fire
by Vesna * Vanessa

Wednesday, March 16, 2011
Rated "G" by the Author.
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I long the ageless longing
the ancient desire to simply be

for the fires of Love consume me

from which I cannot flee

I long for the breeze of

love's touch
 the colours of a new dawn's lush

  the seeming confusion
of a lover's tremor

as he presses lips in dilemma

upon heaving wanton breasts
Clouds of illusion have hidden the one

I know as my blazing Sun

and though fear has risen its ugly head

my Love bleeds the nectar of loins' shed 

erupting upon the smoothness of bare skin 

with an ardour surpassing Odin
I have starved succumbing to fool's gold

while clamorous voices swayed my heart sold

to whims of foolish thought that fled

from hopes of fulfillment in my bed
this mesmerizing longing of dawn's first song

enraptured in embraces long

my heart and soul praying

in gentleness swaying

within this burning heart of mine

which pours ecstatic love sublime

upon the one that is I

forever entwined.. never to die
for that I long
and that I desire

always to burn within Love's fire!


































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Reviewed by baz busbe 4/16/2011
So romantic, could feel the longing for that fire. God bless. Baz
Reviewed by Thomas Mutchler 4/9/2011
This may sound funny, but I found reading this nice mainly because the lines are enjambed and spaced so well. Good work.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 4/4/2011
You Got To be Best Romantic Writer On At A D...

Reviewed by Richard Orey 3/26/2011
What a powerful sharing of deep emotions!

This is what great writing is all about.
Dear Vesna, you have mastered the art.

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante 3/21/2011
such a powerful passion, may love ever surround you
Reviewed by TONY NERONE 3/20/2011
Lovely writing, Vesna.
Reviewed by Dark Knight 3/19/2011
To long for such a Lover is the heart's desire of many people and it is so wonderful to know that in this sad world that you are not alone-you are an amazing poetess and a dear friend to have-may God grant you the desires of your heart this year and may true Love be held close to your heart to never let you go
Reviewed by Andy Turner 3/16/2011
Blimey, do women think like this.
Darn shame you're so far away!!! Sounds like a blokes idea of heaven. xx
Reviewed by Amor Sabor 3/16/2011
Love the romance in these lines.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 3/16/2011
No other force on Earth like that ageless longing. Stunning poem Vesna.
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) 3/16/2011
goregous poetry vesna, in communion forever.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 3/16/2011
I am familiar with those feelings, Vesna. Thank you for sharing your passion. Love and best wishes,

Reviewed by Christine Tsen 3/16/2011
This poem really touches me, so heart-felt, intimate and beautifully written.
Reviewed by Chessly Nesci 3/16/2011
I think we are all longing for love's fire! Great poem Vesna! Peace, and love to you always! ~Chessly
Reviewed by John Bidwell 3/16/2011
Ahhh we are heat seeking missles- longing to disappear in a cosmic blast of connection- the strike- the fire- new elements-
I get a big bang out of this.
For real!


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