AuthorsDen.com   Join Free! | Login    
   Popular! Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    eBOOKS new!     BOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    EVENTS    VIDEOS    GOLD    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  JoAnna Drelleshak, iJim Stewart, iFrank Stephenson, iNina Anderson, iRobin Ouzman Hislop, iJay Onwukwe, iGina LoBiondo, i

  Home > Poetry > Poetry
Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry     

Vesna * Vanessa

· + Follow Me
· Contact Me
· Success story
· Poetry
· News
· Blog
· 277 Titles
· 4,342 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Jun, 2003

Vesna * Vanessa, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.




Featured Book
The Quest for the Prize
by Keith Dyne

A thrilling mystery set in England. Jerry Dumbarton is on a quest to find the prize, an ancient object that will bring love and happiness to the race of man...  
BookAds by Silver
Gold and Platinum Members


Whim?
by Vesna * Vanessa
Rated "G" by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Follow
Recent poems by Vesna * Vanessa
•  Trust-Love's Gold Dust
•  WHIM?
•  I Know YOU
•  The Remembrance
•  Love's Fire
           >> View all 277

ART: Vesna


It seems my visit upon this earth

has brought me only longings

how often did I cry at night...needing to shed my belongings

to ones that  would  value find in their  wholly measure

yet dare I now  lose sight of the inner treasure

 

 

Faithful life with its tides has kept me on its shores

 how long must I remain alone petrified in its claws

fruitless passion tears my soul leaving only famine

 cherished thought extinguished now in darkness I examine


Dauntless hopes and gained dreams which once beset my heart

have suffered at the hands of love...torn to shreds in part

is this the design that nudged my soul life to embrace again

or was it a power beyond mine that begot it on a whim?


 



 

 

 

 


 


 
 

 

 

 

Want to review or comment on this poem?
Click here to login!


Need a FREE Reader Membership?
Click here for your Membership!


Reviewed by William Bonilla
feelings beautifully composed from a passionate heart
Love & peace be with you

William
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
A most compelling and soul-awakening sharing, Vesna. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Axilea MU
Sometimes rhymes work for me. In this poem, I like the way you carry the reader to the final lines. I agree with what Gene says here. TY.



Axilea
Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
halves of hearts will eventually find each other. enjoyed.
Reviewed by Gene Williamson
I sometimes think that life, all life, is begot on a whim.
I like how your carefully carved lines provoke and stimulate...
in rhyme and my favorite purple. Some day, Vesna, I must learn
to rhyme like that... -gene.
Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
Trask is right, passionate, great passion. ~ Morgan
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
You Truly Are Best In Romance---Romantic Writer---World More Of You
Your Passion...

TRASK...
Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Expressive eloquence and I understand the longing you express, Vesna. Powerful.
Blessings,
Christine
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Lovely work, Vesna....both the painting and the poetry!! Nicely done...

Anna
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
beautiful artwork, beautiful poem....really probes and tugs at the very essence of this life we lead here on earth, this illusion of reality, this low-vibrational prism of visible light, acknowledement of the divine power at the core of the universe.
Reviewed by JMS Bell
WONDERFUL ART! THE FACT THAT ONE CAN TALK ABOUT THEIR DISTRESS MEANS THAT THEY ARE ON THE 'UPWARD' ROAD. SO, WHATEVER THEY CHOOSE TO CALL THEIR EXPERIENCES...WHIM?, OR OTHERWISE...IT IS A PART OF LIFE AND THEY CAN VIEW IT AS A 'MOUNTAIN', OR, A 'STEPPING STONE'. GOD BLESS YOU AND THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Beautiful writing as always sweet lady....stay safe and well..Hugss
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
The offering of inspirational devotion reads well between the lines. Love is freely given and accepted and the love of God is forever, beautiful offering...

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by John Flanagan
A fine and thoughtful exploration, Vesna,
finding yourself and your true nature.

John
Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Love is never a whim. I like the thought provoking process in this poem, Vesna.
Peace
Tony
Popular Poetry (Poetry)
  1.  Peekaboo, Doggie Do
  2.  'The real me'
  3.  Taste Of Ambrosia
  4.  Little Voices
  5.  I Whisper Your Name
  6.  Self-Worth Surrendered
  7.  Another Poem of Love
  8.  My Hands
  9.  Shadow Passes - Light Remains
  10.  Hands of Choice

Through Eyes Of Needles by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath

WorksOfGath Books ..  
BookAds by Silver, Gold and Platinum Members

Authors alphabetically: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z

Featured Authors | New to AuthorsDen? | Add AuthorsDen to your Site
Share AD with your friends | Need Help? | About us


Problem with this page?   Report it to AuthorsDen
AuthorsDen, Inc. All rights reserved.