heart-calm is equipped with camouflage
by Tommy Goss
Monday, July 07, 2003
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bounding beneath the expectant arc
of your burial chamber walls
your flickering Platonic shadow
multiplies and digests itself
again and again
awaken your life,
awaken next to stone and dirt,
and listen to the dull yells
of those ancient molecules,
brimming in their hardness
you scrape the dirty walls,
coloring underneath your fingernails
and you remember a thousand desires
for the garments of exposed women
and then you sleep
and dream the innocence of forests:
of morning dew spread out
as if by a heavy sneeze
and you recall
an old woman's cracked,
cracked lips and the thousand memories
of wind and rain that have pressed themselves
against her to drive her into the earth,
like gravity itself
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a cluster of flowers appear
and you take the petals into your mouth
and it tastes like your future,
your death
yet you wake and remember none of this,
and there is a droplet of moisture
somewhere on your own lip
that is quivering with the revelations
in those dreams
but with unconscious recklessness,
you wipe it away
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| Reviewed by Calendula Petal |
7/8/2003 |
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| I read this a few times, made me feel quite strange. It was an excellant piece of writing, just wish I knew why it moved me so. |
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| Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) |
7/8/2003 |
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Excellant work here, you definitely know how to use your words!!!!
~Nikki~ |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
7/8/2003 |
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Wow..Excellent, I liked this,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by samantha mane (Reader) |
7/7/2003 |
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| death will claim us, one and all; shall we live well until the end, and love life with all its sensuous moments. nothing we say can penetrate the grave, so rave on, master wordsmith! |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
7/7/2003 |
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| Gruesome, sad...what can I say...well written. |
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| Reviewed by Zenith Elliott |
7/7/2003 |
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| This is an excellent write, camouflage indeed...~Z~ |
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