Enchanting Queen Of Clouds
by Ashraf Gohar Goreja
Wednesday, November 26, 2003
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Enchanting Queen Of Clouds
By Ashraf Gohar Goreja
I was chasseing a trail of silky clouds
To embark there my wandering soul
Where I had often seen
Your rosary, acute, floating image
Enticing, inviting and keen.
Flying on wings of vagrant winds
With melting colors of heraldic hue
Your cheeks and lips were tinted so
That you could emblaze a lucid heart
Adorn, erratic, and innocent woe.
During the long and gentle night
Your day-bright image recedes in dark
Inspiring horror entice you away
As roaring, deafen waves of sea
Detract the castles of sand, with every fray.
I wish, night could emerge, into a long clear day
And silky clouds could keep on floating
And you, O ! Enchanting queen of esoteric domain
Keep on smiling in your perplex fashion
So I could keep my gaze bewildered, even in bane.
Copyright: July 27, 2003
Ashraf Gohar Goreja
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| Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations |
11/26/2003 |
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This is so very beautiful, and so delicately crafted... like spun silk in the softest pastel hues...
With my heartfelt thanks for your kind comments on my work,
Blessings,
~Alexandra~ |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
11/26/2003 |
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wow! incredible write, ashraf; thanks for sharing! happy thanksgiving to you and yours!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
11/26/2003 |
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Stunning write Ashraf!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
11/26/2003 |
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| Beautifully ethereal, well expressed, Ashraf, a stunning poem! |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
11/26/2003 |
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| Love the descriptions you have used. Great write! |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
11/26/2003 |
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"Enchanting Queen" is such a beautiful write, I enjoyed every line of this. Thank you for sharing!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o) |
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