|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|So astute is the wisdom of your poem!!!
*Jerry* A very good climb for one's mind!!!
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|well penned and I like the rhyme....very little comes with warning. ~ Morgan|
|Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
|No one but ourselves know of the things we may do within the darkness of our own minds. If one can see into that darkness and find the strength to understand the wrong they have done and so, if forgiven by those one may have hurt, so be it to find forgiveness for themselves .
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|It's the hardest lesson for most of us to learn, well penned.|
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Self forgiveness is often the last bastion before insanity. Glad you worked yours out. Patrick|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I give you these words to take as you will,
You must forgive yourself and tears you spill.
Much meaningful and honest advice in this poem, Jerry. Thank you for sharing it. Love and best wishes to you,
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|AS YOU SAID, 'FORGIVING'...OURSELVES OR OTHERS...CAN BE LIKE CLIMBING A HILL. IT IS NOT EASY TO DO BUT, THANK GOD, IT CERTAINLY IS POSSIBLE AND SO NECESSARY IN ORDER TO 'MOVE ON' WITH OUR LIVES. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
|Reviewed by Richard King
|It may be easy to "tell someone...." but it's much more difficult to tell someone you truly care about. I sense a deep caring in your words,,, I congratulate you for putting yourself out there and hope your "Goddess" gets the message. Dick|
|Reviewed by Janna Hill
|Hunkering down. I can relate to fighting emotional battles in such a way at one time. You have written a touching piece here, extending your heart and hand. Being a beacon to one sailing behind you in the same dark waters you crossed.
peace to you & your goddess.
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Forgiving the self of past wrongs is supposedly good karma, but I find it very hard to do...most times I can forget them, but every now and then they rear their ugly head...great write, great advice...e|
|Reviewed by FRANK UNDERWRITTEN
|An interesting blend of Petrarchan and Shakespearean rhyme scheme, forms the backdrop for this open-hearted little gem... and insight and love and forgiveness don't come easy, like this sonnet attests.
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Your poem is the gesture of a true friend, Jerry, I'm sure it will reach the eyes of the goddess lady it is meant for, and also be far reaching beyond ~ and also I love the word dastardly!|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Healing begins when you begin to forgive yourself first. Then as you get stronger, you can truly begin to forgive others, where it is felt deeply within. Everyone says "I'm sorry", but do they really mean it? Sometimes yes, most times no, because usually these are the people who keep hurting us...
Bravo to you and your journey forward...
Peace, love and light,