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| Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci |
10/19/2012 |
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All this lust plus a bit of Poe! You're going to melt that snow!
Love ya!
Jane |
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
5/21/2012 |
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"Like fresh snow" unless you have experienced the crisp and fresh scent of it, you would not know. How it drifts gently outside while each crystal alights on top of each other caressing the ground. :)
What a lovely vision Jerry, beautifully romantically done.
You have left me with that dreamily smile :)
Love and Light
Lily |
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| Reviewed by Diana Legun |
3/26/2012 |
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| It was an attention-getting surprise to read 'scent,' like 'snow,' because of the scentlessness of snow; but I'm realizing you are equivalating the 'drift' of her scent, not her scent being likened to the frangrancelessness of snow. Isn't that a scrunchy bunch of words (mine)? Such a good mix of warmth and cold; kind of like 'nude in a fur coat.' "Poeish night," how original and delicious! ~~ Diana Legun |
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| Reviewed by Janna Hill |
3/5/2012 |
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Succulent!
:) Janna
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
3/2/2012 |
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Another one of your poems expressing a theme with which I can completely relate. Thanks for sharing, Jerry. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
3/2/2012 |
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Erotic Aroma *Jerry*
becoming in your poetry,
and verified picturesque!!!
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
3/2/2012 |
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Nice mix. Historic snow and heaven sent.
Ron
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
3/2/2012 |
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Wow, is right Jerry as this is another steamy and great write indeed Laura
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
3/2/2012 |
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| interesting correlation between a woman's scent as an aphrodisiac and the falling snow ... |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
3/2/2012 |
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Jerry, Jerry, Jerry, another hypnotic erotic poem...Nice....
Peace, love and light,
Amber |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
3/2/2012 |
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Wow! Sensuality oozing out of this one, Jerry! Well done...and the pic is perfect for the poem!
Anna |
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