|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Wow! Sounds like a nightmare indeed...nicely done, Jerry!
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Power for the night *Jerry* with
such eerie blackness to overcome;
however, sadness may still stay!!!!!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|the pain of our past loves does indeed haunt us ...
short but powerful, Jerry ...
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I don't care how much people say that "time heals all," I have not found it to be so when it comes to matters of love gone awry. Nicely done, Jerry. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
I hope the pain subsides, a hurt like you have so well describes dies agonizingly hard. I wish you all the best in its defeat.
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|And she still is on your mind… A thought you can't get rid of… And like the poem says, it hurts.
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Try erasing her name from the wall. Patrick|
|Reviewed by Diana Legun
|I feel a great deal of squeeze in these lines, so effectively drawn to convey a story, a song, a wail and a whimper. When read out loud, there are two places that could make more verbal smoothness: instead of 'teenager,' just 'teen,' and instead of "..I have nowhere..", just "I've..." -- but that's for the 'out loud' read. I like to 'say' poetry. More please :) ~~ Diana|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|has an eerie ring to it, Jerry,
but an open and honest one, too
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|Oh my Jerry this is a truly moving write Laura
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Compellingly sad of lost love. Do not fear her, she is only a figment of your negative side, so blow away negativity and embrace positivity and your nightmares shall disolve.
Great work as always!
Peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Maybe a seance (sp?) or an exorcism would do the trick...good write...e|
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|:( How sad and to have it continue to hurt you in the form of Nightmares. I am a vivid dreamer so my dreams and nightmares are very real to me.
"She comes each night; I have nowhere to flee," a repetitive nightmare is horrifying and the only way to confront it is to stand there and tell her to go away.
Wow, very nice a man who held nothing back and even wrote her name on his wall. Love, it can be very painful when it shouldn't have to be.
This was very good Jerry. :)
Love and Light