|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|just beyond reach, and yet...
how we play tricks on ourselves
but then why not?
well delivered, Jerry,
|Reviewed by Vesper Darby
|grabbing on to an illusion can be tricky no promise of a return trip. perfect picture jerry...can't tell though what she's holding in her left hand...a non-floating illusion perhaps?
i love the trip this one took me on...for it did just that...pat
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|i am not compitent enough to put into words how well thought out and penned this write is.
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Keeping one's head above the water
if you can swim, even floating when
tired...an illusion can take you there
Smiling *Jerry* through this one
|Reviewed by Diana Legun
|Freshness in this one! ~~ Diana|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Sounds like what a good “hit” does to you. Pick your poison.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|our most gripping illusions are those that aren't there ...|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|But people like complication's don't they?......ah a moment with the moon very refreshing :-)|
|Reviewed by Richard King
|I think I need help, Jerry. I haven't been able to get my illusions to float, yet there have been times when I felt the urge to howl. Maybe there is still hope.
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Next time I run into one, I will grab onto to it...e|
|Reviewed by Odin Roark
|Allowing the reader to create his own image makes this poem particular. Thank you.|
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|I just bet it would cause me to smile widely! Bring it on!
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|You watching Dark Shadows too? (1967 version)
Wow, now that is a night time tonic! I prefer tea myself, but will you share? :)
How unique and interesting Jerry... you just took me into the Netherworld of the unknown.. I like it :)
Love and Light