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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
8/10/2012 |
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Love it when your senses shine
*Jerry* with awareness....
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
8/9/2012 |
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| Aw Jerry this poem is so sweet Laura |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
8/8/2012 |
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a truly lovely poem, Jerry,
with fine understanding of our passions
and our senses
john |
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| Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci |
8/8/2012 |
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You are truly smitten!
Love ya!
Jane |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
8/8/2012 |
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you have oerfectly described how a known sound can elisit all our other senses when speaking of onw we love, bravo my friend
budd |
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| Reviewed by Odin Roark |
8/8/2012 |
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| As so many critiques might opt to suggest in their demeaning way: how can one smell through the telephone? Such is their suffering, and your joy. Well done. |
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| Reviewed by Roger Wayne Eberle |
8/8/2012 |
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| Nicely done, Jerry. |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
8/8/2012 |
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Ah!!! Sounds like love to me....I love the way you play with words, Jerry.....truly gifted!
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
8/8/2012 |
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Aw so sweet, it tells me how this person affects you and how you use your imagination. Reminds me when I was a teen and how I adored a boy who didn't know I existed. I would brush against him leaving the class room just to enjoy the moment.
Smiling, really wonderful Jerry
Love and Light
Lily
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| Reviewed by Sandy Hoynacki |
8/8/2012 |
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Sweet and meaningful, Jerry.
Sandy |
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| Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader) |
8/8/2012 |
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What a beautiful love poem, it says everything what she does to you.
Very much enjoyed Jerry |
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